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Poetry Challenge!

Rock-a- bye baby..

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-02-17 10:04 PM

A simple nursery rhyme right? Well try using this nursery rhyme and making it your own? Here i'll give you an example...

Rock-a-bye baby, in the treetop,
Hope you don't tumble; it's quite a steep drop
What are you doing, trying to fly?
You'll soar and you'll sail,
'Til you fall down and die
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Okay that one wasn't happy (sort of depressing if you ask me and creepy)but i bet you guys can make a happy one! Or if you dont want ot make it happy then okay.

Good luck!!

~Zach~

"Nice guys finish last"

oceanvu2
Senior Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA

1 posted 2008-03-03 11:10 PM

Rock me, wry baby, croon in my ear
A tune that will help us to cry in our beer.
When the dawn breaks,
we'll stumble and fall
From the bar to the floor
while ignoring them all.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2008-03-13 03:08 AM

Laughs at Jim's offering .. gives it a shot.

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Rock-a-bye baby, you're growing up way too fast;
take time for laughter because life is a blast.
There's plenty of time
to move out on your own -
so savor each day
before you leave home

Grinch
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since 2005-12-31

Posts 2929
Whoville

3 posted 2008-03-16 06:26 PM

“Rocker buys baby”
announced the TV
Sounded suspicious
But what could it be?
Had Brad and Angie
Took the cash for kids option
Or was it Madonna
And another adoption?

Head slightly spinning
What COULD it be?
This half garbled message
I heard on TV.
Finally I got it
It came to me
The story was Jacko
Had bought a Chimpanzee.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-03-19 04:49 PM

haha oceanvu2 that was funny lol. alison ur's made me think

and last but not least Grinch. hahaha that was funny i was watching the news when i was reading this and i just laughed

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

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