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Falling rain
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0 posted 02-17-2008 10:04 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

A simple nursery rhyme right? Well try using this nursery rhyme and making it your own? Here i'll give you an example...

Rock-a-bye baby, in the treetop,
Hope you don't tumble; it's quite a steep drop
What are you doing, trying to fly?
You'll soar and you'll sail,
'Til you fall down and die
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Okay that one wasn't happy (sort of depressing if you ask me and creepy)but i bet you guys can make a happy one! Or if you dont want ot make it happy then okay. Good luck!!

~Zach~

"Nice guys finish last"

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Rock me, wry baby, croon in my ear
A tune that will help us to cry in our beer.
When the dawn breaks,
we'll stumble and fall
From the bar to the floor
while ignoring them all.


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Laughs at Jim's offering .. gives it a shot.

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Rock-a-bye baby, you're growing up way too fast;
take time for laughter because life is a blast.
There's plenty of time
to move out on your own -
so savor each day
before you leave home
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“Rocker buys baby”
announced the TV
Sounded suspicious
But what could it be?
Had Brad and Angie
Took the cash for kids option
Or was it Madonna
And another adoption?

Head slightly spinning
What COULD it be?
This half garbled message
I heard on TV.
Finally I got it
It came to me
The story was Jacko
Had bought a Chimpanzee.

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4 posted 03-19-2008 04:49 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

haha oceanvu2 that was funny lol. alison ur's made me think and last but not least Grinch. hahaha that was funny i was watching the news when i was reading this and i just laughed

~Zach~  

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~


 
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