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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 08-24-2007 04:30 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed


okie doke everybody, this is my first time here in the challenge department anyways, it was so alluring (i can't resist a challenge) so i'll put you all up to one. i'll start a line of a poem, and then someone else may feel free to copy it and paste it down below with their own line added on. ONLY ONE LINE IN A ROW! you can put in more than one line, but not in a row!

kay, now that i have that cleared up here are the other important rules, the poem must be coherent and acually mean something and every line must relate to the poem as a whole. heres the fun part, you must use one to three (no more, no less) words from the line above the one you post in your own line, ehhh, i guess i'll leave it at that. after it's finished, (which part i haven't quite figured out yet how to decide) i will pool names from you all


heres my line,

The winds on the sea would be much stranger


Have Fun!

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Sunshine
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1 posted 08-24-2007 07:18 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

The winds on the sea would be much stranger
if I could but hear the breath of the sea

Beaone12
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since 08-15-2007
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2 posted 08-24-2007 11:01 PM       View Profile for Beaone12   Email Beaone12   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beaone12

The winds on the sea would be much stranger
if I could but hear the breath of the sea
but the breath is the fog lurking with danger
teddymarvelle
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since 08-26-2007
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california usa


3 posted 08-26-2007 08:02 PM       View Profile for teddymarvelle   Email teddymarvelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teddymarvelle

if not for your love that brings a calm to me
Earth Angel
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4 posted 12-05-2007 02:02 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel


"The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

So I stare out at the sea for hours...
Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal


5 posted 12-05-2007 03:21 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

"So I stare out at the sea for hours"
not noticing the same stare you give

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

rebelangelv
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6 posted 12-05-2007 09:27 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

"So I stare out at the sea for hours"
not noticing the same stare you give
with the same itensity as the sea of power

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

Sunshine
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7 posted 12-05-2007 09:51 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

"So I stare out at the sea for hours"
"not noticing the same stare you give
with the same itensity as the sea of power"
but this be the hour, the one that lives

The churn is beneath these feet, the tome
is within the heart, the sound in this ear
A woman waits within stone walls, a home,
Earth Angel
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since 08-27-2002
Posts 40647
Realms of Light


8 posted 12-05-2007 11:02 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

"So I stare out at the sea for hours"
"not noticing the same stare you give
with the same itensity as the sea of power"
but this be the hour, the one that lives

"The churn is beneath these feet, the tome
is within the heart, the sound in this ear
A woman waits within stone walls, a home,"

~ and gone are all worries and fears.
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 06-11-2007
Posts 1062
In Love <3


9 posted 12-09-2007 08:38 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

oh my gosh!!!!!!!!! it's beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!

bravo!!!!!!!!!!!

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

 
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