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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-08-24 04:30 PM

okie doke everybody, this is my first time here in the challenge department anyways, it was so alluring (i can't resist a challenge) so i'll put you all up to one. i'll start a line of a poem, and then someone else may feel free to copy it and paste it down below with their own line added on. ONLY ONE LINE IN A ROW! you can put in more than one line, but not in a row!

kay, now that i have that cleared up here are the other important rules, the poem must be coherent and acually mean something and every line must relate to the poem as a whole. heres the fun part, you must use one to three (no more, no less) words from the line above the one you post in your own line, ehhh, i guess i'll leave it at that. after it's finished, (which part i haven't quite figured out yet how to decide) i will pool names from you all

heres my line,

The winds on the sea would be much stranger

Have Fun!

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-08-24 07:18 PM

The winds on the sea would be much stranger
if I could but hear the breath of the sea

Beaone12
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since 2007-08-15

Posts 24
Iowa

2 posted 2007-08-24 11:01 PM

The winds on the sea would be much stranger
if I could but hear the breath of the sea
but the breath is the fog lurking with danger

teddymarvelle
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since 2007-08-26

Posts 47
california usa

3 posted 2007-08-26 08:02 PM

if not for your love that brings a calm to me

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-12-05 02:02 AM

"The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

So I stare out at the sea for hours...

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

5 posted 2007-12-05 03:21 AM

The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

"So I stare out at the sea for hours"
not noticing the same stare you give

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

6 posted 2007-12-05 09:27 PM

The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

"So I stare out at the sea for hours"
not noticing the same stare you give
with the same itensity as the sea of power

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2007-12-05 09:51 PM

The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

"So I stare out at the sea for hours"
"not noticing the same stare you give
with the same itensity as the sea of power"
but this be the hour, the one that lives

The churn is beneath these feet, the tome
is within the heart, the sound in this ear
A woman waits within stone walls, a home,

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2007-12-05 11:02 PM

The winds on the sea would be much stranger"
"if I could but hear the breath of the sea"
"but the breath is the fog lurking with danger"
"if not for your love that brings a calm to me"

"So I stare out at the sea for hours"
"not noticing the same stare you give
with the same itensity as the sea of power"
but this be the hour, the one that lives

"The churn is beneath these feet, the tome
is within the heart, the sound in this ear
A woman waits within stone walls, a home,"

~ and gone are all worries and fears.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

9 posted 2007-12-09 08:38 PM

oh my gosh!!!!!!!!! it's beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!

bravo!!!!!!!!!!!

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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