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music_is_my_soul
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since 04-07-2007
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0 posted 04-07-2007 10:58 AM       View Profile for music_is_my_soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for music_is_my_soul

A shrill scream out in the distance
Your head whips up in fear
In an instant youíre at the door
Listening most sincere
You dash down your driveway in a rush
To see if you can help
As you come to the end of the street
You give an unwilling yelp
The children are coming running
From houses all around
Then you see the pink and white truck
The ice cream manís in town!

I'm the kind-a human wrecakge that ya love!
~Gerard Way

Drauntz
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since 03-16-2007
Posts 2907
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1 posted 04-07-2007 11:19 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

this sooooo wonderful and beautifully written.

I love this poem and there is vivid picture in my mind.

I can feel that you are happy now.

but your Icon scares me.

enjoyed very much your poem.
Drauntz
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2 posted 04-07-2007 11:22 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

post your poems in open forum 40 so many will have a chance to read.

take care
music_is_my_soul
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3 posted 04-07-2007 03:08 PM       View Profile for music_is_my_soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for music_is_my_soul

how? I don't know how to.

I'm the kind-a human wrecakge that ya love!
~Gerard Way

Drauntz
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4 posted 04-07-2007 03:13 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

click "Main Poetry Forums" at the bottom of the screen. Then  there you  may choose open etry#40 or teen#8 for teenager
try it.
enjoy.
wish you happy!
 
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