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Angel_without_wings
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since 2006-07-12
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0 posted 2007-03-29 08:20 PM


Write a poem that has nothing negative in it, it doesn't matter how many lines or what style. No negative words you know what I mean. Have fun.
I'm working on one myself when it's finished i'll post it.
Trish

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oceanvu2
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA
1 posted 2007-05-07 06:38 PM



When you are on
the other side of the pool,
I can walk on water.

ChristianSpeaks
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 396
Iowa, USA
2 posted 2007-05-31 06:14 PM


Jim-

That was incredible!
Wow

Dane

Angel_without_wings
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since 2006-07-12
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3 posted 2007-08-04 12:41 PM


Friends will take you by the hand, so
Love to the end why wait for another
Trust forever childs heart so pure
Peace be with you to the end.

Alex pb
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since 2007-07-25
Posts 22
Arizona
4 posted 2007-08-06 09:32 PM


her star lit eyes gaze upon the night sky...
my true brown eyes are drawn to her..
slowly taking my body with them..
I feel the compassion coming from her...

i let her enter my heart...
she is the angel of my heart...
with a beauty so untold....

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
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5 posted 2007-08-07 03:32 PM


You, my love are the greatest thing,
when i'm with you my heart sings,
I can feel all the love you're sending,
thanks for giving me this happy ending.


~great challenge Angel_Without_Wings, sometimes it's good to remember all the good things we have. Welcome to Passions too Hope you find a place inside these blue pages.~
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

jarrett
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since 2006-05-10
Posts 72
Ut, USA
6 posted 2007-08-09 07:54 PM


Thanks for your replies they where wonderful.
Trish

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