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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2007-01-03 11:50 PM



ok so y'all remember your first post hmmm here my challenge kay fix up your first post and repost it again and see if the replies increased/decreased etc. ect blah blah blah
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Christopher
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1 posted 2007-01-04 11:44 AM


lol - I actually tried to remember what my first post had been... it's been almost 7-1/2 years since I put it up. I admit, I couldn't remember what it was and had to go look to find it. Now I know why I forgot it!
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2 posted 2007-01-04 02:16 PM


Actually I joined 11-10-01 and my first post was in reference to 9-11. Otherwise it is a challenge I would have been interested in. Hope you get some people accepting the challenge.
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3 posted 2007-01-04 07:05 PM


Well, Hunnie, your little challenge made me go back and realize that my first post, which is also on the Main Pages, was accepted, albeit in its awkward meteric form, and in a fashion that I thought was very well by the poets who were among the first to arrive at Passions.  And I have felt welcome ever since.

Because you prompted me to "go look"...I came across one of my favorite poets who had responded to it almost a year ago to the day.  I hadn't seen her response.  I was very pleased to see her name, as she has a similar poem.

I don't think I will share it again, in any other form, on the Open forum, as it is, as it is, on the main pages now, but I will link it here for you to review, if you've a mind to do so.

Thank you for the walk down "memory lane".


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[Edited to fix link]


[This message has been edited by Ron (01-04-2007 07:49 PM).]

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4 posted 2007-01-04 09:39 PM


Christopher- Very lovely, I liked the thoughts in thios poem, I don't know how your poetry is now so i will have to check it out and see how different it is. I was however very impressed for a first post

Larry C- Thank you for the encouragement I understand the feelings not to repost at this time...

Sunshine- I liked this poem too, I felt it was set in a happy tone. I will also read your recent poems  to see the change.

Best wishes,
hunnie
ps. Well i guess y'all got me motivated to do my first post too so i shall, sooooon....

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5 posted 2007-01-05 05:08 PM


I am going to go back to my first post and do that now.
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6 posted 2007-01-05 11:56 PM


okaie here is mine
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haha...Wow I changed this poem so much it is so different from what it started out as... hmmm well y'all don't know how long it took me to find the acual first copy(and only) grrrrr I acually went to the archives and looked through every page until i found it... At least I knew what poetry thing it was in or it would have taken me years ahhhh. hmmm who knew my poetry would have changed that drastically well before I murdered almost the whole thing

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7 posted 2007-01-10 09:41 AM


This is mine off a long time ago now 13 october 1999 been posting here on and off for over 7 years now.

Anyway thought i'd leave this link not repost as frankly i get way less replies now than i used to and well i'd only get less and i'd cry.

Only joking.
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So won't you sing me a rainbow Josie roll me a song
Just tonight make it right 'cause it's been wrong for oh so long

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8 posted 2007-01-10 10:56 PM


I liked this Walter... It's nice to know someone who knows the same feelings... Haha I know what you mean you got more replies then. I did too, I think it's all these new people
hunnie

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