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0 posted 11-22-2006 09:54 PM       View Profile for pen&paper   Email pen&paper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen&paper

okay...not exactly hard to write about...

write a poem any from, structure, blah blah blah

about a teenager(boy or girl) who:

1) isn't popular
2) been ditched by their friends
3) feels completely isolated and worthless


im insane i know

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1 posted 11-23-2006 11:43 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

it's days like this i cannot breathe inside,
it makes me wish that i had died,
no one knows me i don't even have humility,
it ain't that fun to have a cloak of invisability,

if i just had one smile from a passing friend,
my life wouldn't be this close to being the end,
i sit here alone in my personal hell,
am i okay to approach no one can tell,

i used to have friends before this depression,
if only i could be happyand go back into regression,
before all my friends left me alone in this school,
they thought giddy was fun depression wasn't too cool,

maybe if i didn't always feel so alone,
i could reminise to the memories i have always known.
feeling once like i was real,
now i can only wait for my mind to heal,

it's days like this i cannot breathe inside,
it makes me wish that i had died.

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In your dreams

2 posted 11-26-2006 08:50 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

One could wait for eternity
to let the day end and go home

You would be surprise
How some one I didn’t know
Could strip me down naked
even though I was fully clothed

I was a happy little child
who Stood on top of the dog house
who sung on top of her lungs
Well I am not her anymore

But even now, I cant stop looking back
Blaming myself and the world
I fight that little voice, those thoughts….


-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (11-27-2006 06:21 PM).]

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3 posted 11-27-2006 04:30 PM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

Wheel of fortune

Life is a wheel of fortune that never will turn to me.
Coming up on my name, it slows down and waves good bye
Tricking my heart into hoping a winner I could be.
Wheel turning stops dead at the kids who could have the sky.

Walking off alone, salty teardrops falling down my face.
Staring at the ground, avoiding acceptance of reality.
Only ones I can call a friend think wishes are a waste.
They gave up long ago, on everyone in life but me.

Chose to come waiting for the day I am seen.
All the classmates who used to be my friends
A movie I direct but I am off screen.
My old friends ignore me, knowing how I’ll end.

Ever since I have had leukemia cells inside
Since word got out I was not currently at deaths door
So my friends treat me like I have already died.
I want to believe, when I depart, they will suffer more.

My secret spread, a constant lingering rumor, everyone was nice.
Smiles in the hallway, popular with people that I did not know are alive.
Perfect social life out of pity, but my friends were telling lies.
Making it seem worse all because I was attracting fame on being about to die.

In and out of school, drained from attempts to keep me breathing still.
Every time I drifted back, there was something for me, until remission
No one wanted to hear my news I had to tell, again left with nil.
Now my only companions envy me a way out, I ‘m left alone, wishin’.
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4 posted 03-27-2007 12:59 AM       View Profile for minus   Email minus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for minus

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5 posted 02-03-2008 08:37 AM       View Profile for Ri   Email Ri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ri

I sit, without a single stare
Life by stealth, disregarded
It is as if you don’t even know I am there
Am I something you stood on or just retarded?

Cradle myself away guarded
From the contempt in their voice
My eyes grow heavier, as tears are bombarded
End of the line, it’s all about the right choice

My end met by mourn or rejoice?
As rain falls like my heavy heart
Yet, staring at my darkest hour, I was hoist
Out of the abyss, where otherwise I depart

In those hours,  I saw what may be
Though I have so much life to see
And although I cannot make any guarantee:
Whilst I do stand alone; I stand alone for me.

The wind of life and air from above smells of death.
Angels sing of the end.
There's nothing you say and nothing you try can change time.
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6 posted 01-05-2009 08:30 PM       View Profile for FallenAngelz   Email FallenAngelz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FallenAngelz

A Lone Heart
My heart is filled with great emptiness inside,
I am alone in this world,
I lay forgotten within my castle,
As I waited many years for her return,
My heart is still alone,
Patiently waiting for my adoring love to return,
To return to my heart and that this emptiness,
That lies within my forgotten soul,
This great loneliness brings great sorrow to my life,
A life that has no meaning without the adoring love,
An adoring love that only she can give me,
I lay in this begotten castle waiting for her return,
She left without saying goodbye so she must return,
I carry this sword beside me,
Because I won't ever leave my throne,
My lone heart has only one thing to protect,
My soul's throne for eternal love,
That I have given to my adoring princess,
Keep on fighting for the love I have for her,
Because I know one day, she will come back to me
May the lone prince rest in peace in the forgotten castle
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