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Come and have a go if you think your dark enough

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Walter Poe
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0 posted 05-14-2006 06:36 AM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Walter Poe

Look i haven't been here for a while and anyone who maybe read a few of my poems in the past knows i have a thing for 'Dark poems' I just feel they are more deep. Well i looked at a few poems an that forum and to be honest the darkness is slipping a bit now i KNOW we can write V.V. dark poems if you really dredge down deep i'm going to post one now see what i can do any one out there thinks they can out do me please have a go give me something i can really feel in the cobwebbed depths of my twisted soul. any one who can write a dark poem well enough for me to put it in my library i will personally write a poem of any kind for.  (Warning my library contains 9 poems covering 6 years so it has to be good.) All poems must be in the Dark Forum and just drop poems name and post date as a reply here.

I went to the desert on a horse with no name, it felt good to get out of the rain.

Fabiani
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1 posted 05-14-2006 06:34 PM       View Profile for Fabiani   Email Fabiani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fabiani

http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum84/HTML/002330.html

i dont think this is a good poem by far but i tried ill right more for sure i dont feel good about this one
kif kif
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2 posted 06-03-2006 07:36 PM       View Profile for kif kif   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kif kif

hmmm. Hello Mr. Poe. What do you define as dark? I think a lot of my stuff's dark, but not in a goth sense...and before you *giggle, not in a 'I'm blind' way, either!

I'd say just go browsing, but this place is so huge, I can see why you've posted this.

Good luck, dark seeker.

Onelove-hahaha!

ps; I've just had to change to the word 'giggle' because the server will not allow me to say a word beginning with s, but the rest is a racist word! oh me oh my.
Walter Poe
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3 posted 06-04-2006 08:52 AM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Walter Poe

Walters Definition of dark - Something that you dredge up from the dark bits of your soul. A dark poem is one that upon reading it makes you feel like you do waking from a nightmare you half remember scared and alone in a way you can't quite place your finger on. Maybe this is a little vague but the scope for darkness is vast from great epic quests to unconcious fears you can't realise.

I went to the desert on a horse with no name, it felt good to get out of the rain.

Alone in the dark
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4 posted 08-02-2006 04:43 AM       View Profile for Alone in the dark   Email Alone in the dark   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alone in the dark

Hi Walter! I've got a poem that I posted on 4-22-06 that's called "Welcome to Hell". I'm not sure if it will be dark enough for you, but I can tell you that it was written during one of the darkest times of my life. Check it out, and let me know what you think.

   ^*^Angel^*^      
                  


           
ILoveTheRain
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5 posted 06-30-2008 11:23 PM       View Profile for ILoveTheRain   Email ILoveTheRain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ILoveTheRain

Mine is called Color-Filled Emotions in a different forum, so just search me and you will find it. Hopefully you will enjoy it
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6 posted 07-01-2008 10:50 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Paul??? no joke its really you?? I thought you had disappeared. you scared the(bad word) outta mee.... but man have i missed you.. I haven't wrote anything dark in sooo long i think I will give it a go...
Krysti
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7 posted 07-01-2008 11:33 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum84/HTML/003987.html

there we go see how bad i got:S LoL
Walter Poe
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8 posted 07-03-2008 03:25 AM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Walter Poe

it wasn't me this is an old post. Sorry to scare i just been really busy with things and stuff for quite a while. just seems like one thing after another. since i last talked to you i've moved twice and about a hundred other things have been and gone along the way. My e-mails etc have been all but completely neglected.

Course i missed out chatting but my mind has a habit of jumping around and whenever i was gonna post you or even stick a poem on here i got distracted by something else.

How are you anyway - get back to me please. I'll make time.

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

Ethan Halo
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9 posted 11-19-2008 04:30 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

i haven't written anything in forever, and anything dark for even longer than that.

but i just posted a reply in another challenge on here that may suit your dark needs.

it's nothing special, it was off the cuff. just trying to use the line for the challenge.

but i hope it helps you get your dark fix.
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum7/HTML/000753.html#6

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

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