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brunettebrewer
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since 03-10-2006
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Oklahoma, USA


0 posted 03-10-2006 12:57 PM       View Profile for brunettebrewer   Email brunettebrewer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit brunettebrewer's Home Page   View IP for brunettebrewer

Here is my entry..
I am new here so I hope I am doing this right lol

My best Friend

My best friend is not a person
and when I am with him, there is always fun

When I am with him I always smile
and he makes everyday worthwhile

My best friend dosen't talk
but he is there when I need someone to listen

My best friend does not lie
and he is the one i go to when I cry

My best friend is always there
my best friend will always care

I will always need my teddy bear

Tarina Marie Barber

Copyright 2006 Tarina Marie Barber http://mrstarinaspoems.blogspot.com

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stargal
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since 03-06-2006
Posts 1350
OR USA


1 posted 03-10-2006 01:06 PM       View Profile for stargal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stargal

Wow... I love this poem! The whole time i thought you were talking about a person, but when it turned out to be a teddy bear it was a nice suprise! one thing... I would actually post this in the main forums... I think it's called open poetry or something, it's #37 is all i know... Or post it in teen poetry

Great job! welcome to pip

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Kerri Souza
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since 01-17-2003
Posts 18
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2 posted 03-20-2006 09:03 PM       View Profile for Kerri Souza   Email Kerri Souza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kerri Souza

This is a great poem. Before I got to the end I was thinking maybe it was a poem about a dog ( that's who know's all my secrets). The ending brought me back to childhood when my teddy was the one I cried to. Thank you for sharing this.

Kerri

BROTHER JOHN
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since 04-06-2006
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3 posted 04-06-2006 01:35 AM       View Profile for BROTHER JOHN   Email BROTHER JOHN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BROTHER JOHN

Thank you for your creativity.  You got my attention at once.  Keep it up.

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