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brunettebrewer New Member
since 2006-03-10
Posts 2Oklahoma, USA |
Here is my entry.. I am new here so I hope I am doing this right lol My best Friend My best friend is not a person and when I am with him, there is always fun When I am with him I always smile and he makes everyday worthwhile My best friend dosen't talk but he is there when I need someone to listen My best friend does not lie and he is the one i go to when I cry My best friend is always there my best friend will always care I will always need my teddy bear Tarina Marie Barber Copyright ©2006 Tarina Marie Barber http://mrstarinaspoems.blogspot.com |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Wow... I love this poem! The whole time i thought you were talking about a person, but when it turned out to be a teddy bear it was a nice suprise! one thing... I would actually post this in the main forums... I think it's called open poetry or something, it's #37 is all i know... Or post it in teen poetry  Great job! welcome to pip @-->--- |
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Kerri Souza Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 18R.I. |
This is a great poem. Before I got to the end I was thinking maybe it was a poem about a dog ( that's who know's all my secrets). The ending brought me back to childhood when my teddy was the one I cried to. Thank you for sharing this. Kerri |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Thank you for your creativity. You got my attention at once. Keep it up. |
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