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desert-spike
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0 posted 2006-03-05 04:31 AM



Every so often, one needs to clear ones attic of cobwebs. Sometimes the way to do that is to write sheer, utter nonsensical stuff.

So, the object here, is to write nonsensical, stuff.

Compose the first thing that comes into your mind, no matter how strange it feels to you.

© Copyright 2006 Gabriel T. Unbehaun - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-03-05 12:29 PM


I'll bite - but Warning, Warning, Jack Robinson.... - it's a repost of one that I would, indeed, rename as a flight of Whimsey.

~*~



I want to fall up

come with me, let’s fall up
and not into something deep
I think it’s time to do it different
before we go to sleep

for if we fall up, and play in clouds
what a treat we’d find
all our problems now ant-size
all bad habits left behind

fall up with me, not in love with me
you don’t even have to be in like with me
but if you come fall up with me
wouldn’t that be heavenly?

Come let’s talk to angels,
and help them in the choir
now I don’t have much of a voice
but if you sing bass, I’ll sing higher…

and let’s make faces out of clouds
of animals or some such things
and while we play our game just right
let’s whip up some sun-rings

since we’re here, let’s grab God’s ear
and tell him how pleased we are
for this imagination he’s given us
c’mon with me, let’s fall up this far!

What is this? You don’t want to play
and fall up with me to far away?
and you’d toss my dreams to reality?
for the truth you’d rather see?

But can’t you see? There, in the skies
where up and up is in the blue?
why don’t you try just once with me
and let me fall up with you.

Circa, 30 November 2000
repost for a friend...



Martie
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2 posted 2006-03-05 02:50 PM


d-s

Although I need to clear the cobwebs, I'll opt out with a repost also.  If Sunshine can then so can I...right?  Here ya go:

A Super Sunday

Snow has captured the mountains
and down the canyons it breaths
into the empty city streets
around the cement and bricks
of Sunday at three

The sky is a dull gray
and from the house of stone
across the street with door open
I hear loud shouts and cheers
that echo around the branches
of the naked trees

I race across the lawn
and throw myself down
hands gripping the legs of my startled husband
trying to get into the super bowl mood
but the lawn streaks my light blue jeans green
and he falls with a loud thud into the rose bush
and the mood is not good

I look back across the street as loud curses
flip across the parked pick up trucks
and bounce across the street
as I sit on the damp ground with my moaning man
who is looking at me now
with a look that feels like he caught
whatever had been thrown

This seems like a good thing to do
to sit here as the afternoon breathes that cool air
and listen to the human sounds that start
a chaos of dogs barking down the alley
and across the street into the village

Listen I say to his almost smile
the one that is playing now as I take his hand
and pull him toward me
as we both sit perfectly still
while through the neighbor’s window
on a giant screen
the blurred game is played

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
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3 posted 2006-03-26 12:32 PM


Well... This was the first thing that came to mind, so here you go


Chocolate

Chocolate that beautiful delight
It melts in your mouth
With heart rendering fright
It tastes so luscious
You can't get enough
The colors galore
Amazing for sure
White, light, it's all a delight
It comes in squares, circles, and stairs
Eat till you bust
It's a buffet till your stuffed
Chocolate, chocolate, chocolate
The special high of my life
Let us eat and eat
For that chocolate must rest
Yes, rest my dear friends
It must stay in my tummy for the "rest" of its life!


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icebox
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4 posted 2006-03-26 08:50 PM



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jarrett
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since 2006-05-10
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5 posted 2006-05-13 11:57 PM


This seems fun I'll try it..

This happiness inside my soul
Is something i've never felt before
From this happiness, i'm flying without wings

Right now I can never do anything wrong
This journey doesn't seem so long
I'm acually excited to see another day
I await for arms that are opened up wide

I can now see my light shine
Because of this happiness inside
  



Dime&Penny
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since 2006-05-20
Posts 5
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6 posted 2006-05-20 01:37 AM


Thought I'd try this...

The keyboard in my hands
Likes to play and dance.
It runs away from my fingers.
I spell with oft the wrong letters.
When my laptop was new,
Every letter worked.
But now it's been a while
And a couple have been jerked...
My Q hardly works.

Blossom
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since 2006-05-12
Posts 8
Georgia, USA
7 posted 2006-05-20 07:07 PM


Picking through the words
I popped a big one into my mouth
and savored its meaning.
And as it melted down into my body
I was eagerly reaching for some more.
My father's old college dictionary
fells like candy in my hands.
And I don't want to share it with you.


composed at 7:09pm today.

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