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Skyfire
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0 posted 2006-02-19 09:41 PM



Andrew stole my muse; I've been making half-hearted attempts to write, but the inspiration just isn't there. I want to re-introduce myself to my first love, prose, but alas, everything I write is ... not so great.

I need a sentence, a paragraph, a character description, ANYTHING, PLEASE.

*gets on her knees and starts begging for scraps of insiration*

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The City's skyline mocked me.  Bright lights and concrete, 2 A.M. and I needed a drink.  

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2 posted 2006-02-20 05:09 PM


/pip/Forum15/HTML/002393.html

Thank you

desert-spike
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3 posted 2006-02-21 03:19 PM


*gets on her knees and starts begging for scraps of insiration*

That right there, sounds like a very lucious topic to write prose about, me thinks.

If you don't use it, I will. ~.^

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4 posted 2006-02-22 05:30 PM


go forth and use it! It doesn't speak to me, just like just about everything else these days o.O

and then He created the horse...

desert-spike
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5 posted 2006-02-23 06:15 AM


Alright then I will.

For you...tell me something about fog, in lengthy prose.  

The spring thaw is almost at hand, and fog is inevitible.

If you need a topic, there ya go. Fog.

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6 posted 2006-02-23 06:43 AM



Or...

After the fog dispersed, he found himself surrounded by...

GO!


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7 posted 2006-02-23 05:37 PM


ooooo... Very nice Sunshine.
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8 posted 2006-02-27 11:27 PM


can i try...

the mysteries that had been his nightmares and ...

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9 posted 2006-03-10 04:04 AM


Sunshine....   /pip/Forum15/HTML/002401.html   thank you, I enjoyed that one  



and then He created the horse...

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10 posted 2006-03-10 01:30 PM


Can i try?
Nah, this sounds dumb but...

It's snowing in hell tonight...

Your right, that's dumb :P

@-->---

desert-spike
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11 posted 2006-03-10 03:56 PM


It's snowing in Hell tonight

I like that.

if I add a line or two?

It's snowing in Hell tonight
I turned off the television, dismayed.
The Minnesota Vikings won the superbowl.
The devil himself must be digging out his earmuffs.

rhia_5779
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12 posted 2006-11-16 01:49 PM


Trapped in a fish bowl full of chunks of emotion without a fish
Walter Poe
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13 posted 2006-11-29 05:37 AM


Always inspired by the initial cry
she shook with effort at new dawns burn

A mistress of wonder who heard the words
Cried such tears as you never heard

So won't you sing me a rainbow Josie roll me a song
Just tonight make it right 'cause it's been wrong for oh so long

rhia_5779
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14 posted 2006-11-29 09:58 AM


ooh nice walter
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15 posted 2007-03-09 09:45 PM


Down On My Knees
Down on my knees, alive but dead…
Look at this invisible blood that I’ve bled.    
Confused, lonely and tired…
Too weary to even see that I’m on fire;
Burning on nothing but anger and rage.
Always sad that my scars never fade…
I always wipe away my own tears, its hard not to cry when there is no place safe from my fears
I’ve always wanted someone to take them away
Falling asleep forgetting to pray that I won’t weep on tomorrows new day,
And that someone will see me down on my knees, lively but dead,
Choking on my blood that’s been bled….

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