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Skyfire
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0 posted 02-19-2006 09:41 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire


Andrew stole my muse; I've been making half-hearted attempts to write, but the inspiration just isn't there. I want to re-introduce myself to my first love, prose, but alas, everything I write is ... not so great.

I need a sentence, a paragraph, a character description, ANYTHING, PLEASE.

*gets on her knees and starts begging for scraps of insiration*
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1 posted 02-19-2006 11:23 PM       View Profile for icebox   Email icebox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for icebox


The City's skyline mocked me.  Bright lights and concrete, 2 A.M. and I needed a drink.  
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2 posted 02-20-2006 05:09 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum15/HTML/002393.html

Thank you
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3 posted 02-21-2006 03:19 PM       View Profile for desert-spike   Email desert-spike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desert-spike

*gets on her knees and starts begging for scraps of insiration*

That right there, sounds like a very lucious topic to write prose about, me thinks.

If you don't use it, I will. ~.^
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4 posted 02-22-2006 05:30 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

go forth and use it! It doesn't speak to me, just like just about everything else these days o.O

and then He created the horse...

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5 posted 02-23-2006 06:15 AM       View Profile for desert-spike   Email desert-spike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desert-spike

Alright then I will.

For you...tell me something about fog, in lengthy prose.  

The spring thaw is almost at hand, and fog is inevitible.

If you need a topic, there ya go. Fog.
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6 posted 02-23-2006 06:43 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Or...

After the fog dispersed, he found himself surrounded by...

GO!

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7 posted 02-23-2006 05:37 PM       View Profile for desert-spike   Email desert-spike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desert-spike

ooooo... Very nice Sunshine.
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8 posted 02-27-2006 11:27 PM       View Profile for neil.gd   Email neil.gd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for neil.gd

can i try...

the mysteries that had been his nightmares and ...
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9 posted 03-10-2006 04:04 AM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Sunshine....   http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum15/HTML/002401.html   thank you, I enjoyed that one  



and then He created the horse...
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Can i try?
Nah, this sounds dumb but...

It's snowing in hell tonight...

Your right, that's dumb :P

@-->---

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It's snowing in Hell tonight

I like that.

if I add a line or two?

It's snowing in Hell tonight
I turned off the television, dismayed.
The Minnesota Vikings won the superbowl.
The devil himself must be digging out his earmuffs.
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12 posted 11-16-2006 01:49 PM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

Trapped in a fish bowl full of chunks of emotion without a fish
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13 posted 11-29-2006 05:37 AM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Walter Poe

Always inspired by the initial cry
she shook with effort at new dawns burn

A mistress of wonder who heard the words
Cried such tears as you never heard

So won't you sing me a rainbow Josie roll me a song
Just tonight make it right 'cause it's been wrong for oh so long

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14 posted 11-29-2006 09:58 AM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

ooh nice walter
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15 posted 03-09-2007 09:45 PM       View Profile for EmoAnime   Email EmoAnime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EmoAnime

Down On My Knees
Down on my knees, alive but deadÖ
Look at this invisible blood that Iíve bled.    
Confused, lonely and tiredÖ
Too weary to even see that Iím on fire;
Burning on nothing but anger and rage.
Always sad that my scars never fadeÖ
I always wipe away my own tears, its hard not to cry when there is no place safe from my fears
Iíve always wanted someone to take them away
Falling asleep forgetting to pray that I wonít weep on tomorrows new day,
And that someone will see me down on my knees, lively but dead,
Choking on my blood thatís been bledÖ.

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