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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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0 posted 09-26-2005 05:12 PM       View Profile for CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa   Email CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa


"I AM"

I am lost in the world, crying out for love
I wonder where I will be in the end
I hear the screeches of a thousand broken hearts
I see the tears of a million dying souls
I want to know when I lost control
I am lost in the world, crying out for love

I pretend that everything is really alright
I feel the stabs of a million knives
I touch the face of a man who isn't really there
I worry that I'll be stuck here forever
I cry on the shoulder of friends that I no longer see
I am lost in the world, crying out for love

I understand the screams that you hear in the night
I say all the things you that you wish were right
I dream of the day ill meet you again
I try to uphold the image I've made
I hope that someday, you might know the truth
I am lost in the world, crying out for love.


<3 yeahhhhh i know, it bites, but whatever<3

<3kerR

I might have messy hair, runny makeup and a tear-steaked face, but at least I know I have loved.

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1 posted 09-26-2005 08:17 PM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

This thing just will not die!!!! lol

You have done an absolutely superb job of this. I am seriously in awe.

I hope that someday, you might know the truth
I am lost in the world, crying out for love.


These lines tell more than most (including me) could in a full write.

When all is said
All is done
Still I live
And carry on-
Quiet Riot

HAZMATTO
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2 posted 11-25-2005 07:28 AM       View Profile for HAZMATTO   Email HAZMATTO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HAZMATTO

VERY GOOD READ. LOSING YOUR SELF IS EASY BUT FINDING YOURSELF IS SO MUCH MORE ENLIGHTENING. I THINK YOU HAVE FOUND YOURSELF. GOOD JOB.

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3 posted 11-25-2005 12:04 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Excellent rise to this challenge.  Sends a message that life's journey is never easy and I enjoyed the walk with you.

To see real beauty you must look with your heart.
~ Carpe diem ~

 
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