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I need a jolt desperately...
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It has been a long dry spell for my muse. She, the worthless hussy, has done nothing to help me write in so long that I'm considering putting her on the next shuttle flight! Would you....could you..help me? all I need is a phrase or two....4 to 10 words strung together....I'll dedicate the poems to YOU. Thanks....  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay... I'll try. "Basically it's all the same-- until it's different yesterday." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
She watches the view from yesterday.... |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
she danced naked in the surf, frolicking, evading, tempting, sating; her footsteps in the sand were across my heart and though she is gone, though the sea smoothed the beach, the waters of time have not erased the footprints on my heart. -majnu -------------------------------------- Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet. [This message has been edited by majnu (04-14-2005 02:56 AM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
OK. ...the shadow tongues of memory reach inside the imagery drifting through awareness in my evening's early mist... Now, for the real challenge, tell your sulky muse to write it like a man. *smile* |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
The truest love was found in the smile of a child as he handed his mother a dandilion. (If you do get anything from this,,Id appreciate the dedication going to my son Ronny....thank you) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Basically it's all the same, until it's different yesterday. Look past the hedgerow, my love. No longer do you see dandelions blooming. Instead you glimpse thorns, eating the early buds of Spring. It is the same today, as it was yesterday. The only difference is that today I feel worse than yesterday and tomorrow I will think about how badly I felt today. The hyacinths will still bloom, the tulips shall sing and the lilies will hang their weary heads; but I - I will still just be. Because basically it's all the same, until it is different yesterday. ---------------------------------------- Thanks K . . . Love YOU Lady . . . (Sorry Sharon, I stoledit it) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
try these, Sharon... I speak to you my silent one - my rhapsody of lucent dreams ... (or both in the same stanza) if these don't do much, lemme know... I have these set of lines which I can't seem to use any ******* way and they are crying out for writers with way better skills than mine  regards sudhir p.s. forgive the expletives ... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Um...icebox? You know me.  Ask me to try to do something like a man, and I'll answer: "I'll give a shot." /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayprivate&number=61&topic=000545 *chuckle* (does this mean I can't have your baby?) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
/pip/Forum92/HTML/001897.html Thank you Maureen!!! I'm still working on others from her so I do thank you all so much!!! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I used the verse I posted above: /pip/Forum92/HTML/002046.html You still are welcome to use it if you wish; I simply had to get it out of my head. Sorry. |
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