How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Discussion
 Poetry Challenge!
 a challenge from Michelle_loves_Mike
 1 2 3 4 5 6
Follow us on Facebook

 Moderated by: Ron   (Admins )

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Not Available
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

a challenge from Michelle_loves_Mike

 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Michelle_loves_Mike
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 12-20-2003
Posts 1200
Pennsylvania


0 posted 03-11-2005 06:15 PM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

Howdy, I was funnin around with this poem,,,,and thought It would make a right nifty lil challenge, like, write a poem, that you can flip upside dow, and it still works,,,,here's mine,,,,,it's ok if you don't want to do it too,not too many respond to me anyway,,,,,ttfn

I'm so scared,
Please don't leave me.
I'm nothing without you.
I didn't mean to hurt you.
You are my life....
I can't live without you.
I need you....
I love you.
I need you....
I can't live without you.
You are my life....
I didn't mean to hurt you.
I'm nothing without you.
Please don't leave me.
I'm so scared...

OK,,,so, I guess it's corny,,,,and alot of you here will do much better, but,,least it is an example....Have fun.

No one really cares,,why should I?

Michelle_loves_Mike
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 12-20-2003
Posts 1200
Pennsylvania


1 posted 03-12-2005 04:30 AM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

Not even one lil taker?

No one really cares,,why should I?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 03-02-2003
Posts 9998
New York


2 posted 03-12-2005 09:12 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Bear

Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Velvet coat my finger trace
Darkness falls, I am alone
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Hazel eyes and stoic bone
Sweet breath caress upon my face  
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Velvet coat my finger trace

--------------------------------------

Velvet coat my finger trace
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Sweet breath caress upon my face  
Hazel eyes and stoic bone
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Darkness falls, I am alone
Velvet coat my finger trace
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
-----------------------------------------

a triolet . . . *smile*
Michelle_loves_Mike
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 12-20-2003
Posts 1200
Pennsylvania


3 posted 03-12-2005 09:57 AM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

Very awsum write little wing! Well done indeed!  and cute too,,lol

No one really cares,,why should I?

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 12-03-1999
Posts 932
just about where I want to be


4 posted 04-01-2005 08:55 AM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

I Am alone
I can't see anything
I Sit in the dark
I Feel my heart pounding
I try to speak
My pulse is fast
My body shakes
My ears hear nothing
My arms touch nothing
My body is cold
No sound is heard as I scream
I am alone

__________________________________________

I am alone
No sound is heard as I scream
My body is cold
My arms touch nothing
My ears hear nothing
My body shakes
My pulse is fast
I try to speak
I feel my heart pounding
I sit in the dark
I can't see anything
I am alone

This is a dr'ed repost..but it still works
Michelle_loves_Mike
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 12-20-2003
Posts 1200
Pennsylvania


5 posted 04-01-2005 04:58 PM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

well done indeed
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 01-18-2000
Posts 24152
with you


6 posted 04-01-2005 11:00 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

this is a really fun challenge...as soon as I get some time to try this, I am
 
 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Discussion >> Poetry Challenge! >> a challenge from Michelle_loves_Mike Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Not Available
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors