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0 posted 2005-03-11 06:15 PM


Howdy, I was funnin around with this poem,,,,and thought It would make a right nifty lil challenge, like, write a poem, that you can flip upside dow, and it still works,,,,here's mine,,,,,it's ok if you don't want to do it too,not too many respond to me anyway,,,,,ttfn

I'm so scared,
Please don't leave me.
I'm nothing without you.
I didn't mean to hurt you.
You are my life....
I can't live without you.
I need you....
I love you.
I need you....
I can't live without you.
You are my life....
I didn't mean to hurt you.
I'm nothing without you.
Please don't leave me.
I'm so scared...

OK,,,so, I guess it's corny,,,,and alot of you here will do much better, but,,least it is an example....Have fun.

No one really cares,,why should I?

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1 posted 2005-03-12 04:30 AM


Not even one lil taker?

No one really cares,,why should I?

littlewing
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2 posted 2005-03-12 09:12 AM


Bear

Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Velvet coat my finger trace
Darkness falls, I am alone
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Hazel eyes and stoic bone
Sweet breath caress upon my face  
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Velvet coat my finger trace

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Velvet coat my finger trace
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Sweet breath caress upon my face  
Hazel eyes and stoic bone
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
Darkness falls, I am alone
Velvet coat my finger trace
Best friend asleep beneath a stone
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a triolet . . . *smile*

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3 posted 2005-03-12 09:57 AM


Very awsum write little wing! Well done indeed!  and cute too,,lol

No one really cares,,why should I?

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4 posted 2005-04-01 08:55 AM


I Am alone
I can't see anything
I Sit in the dark
I Feel my heart pounding
I try to speak
My pulse is fast
My body shakes
My ears hear nothing
My arms touch nothing
My body is cold
No sound is heard as I scream
I am alone

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I am alone
No sound is heard as I scream
My body is cold
My arms touch nothing
My ears hear nothing
My body shakes
My pulse is fast
I try to speak
I feel my heart pounding
I sit in the dark
I can't see anything
I am alone

This is a dr'ed repost..but it still works

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5 posted 2005-04-01 04:58 PM


well done indeed
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6 posted 2005-04-01 11:00 PM


this is a really fun challenge...as soon as I get some time to try this, I am
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