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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2005-02-03 08:38 AM


Do You See
Vapor of spring rising?
Mountainsides white?
Melting into water cities
Since you’ve smiled
Southern winds turning face
Toward sounds low-flying
Grassy orchards, dancing day
Nests of heaven shining twilight inferno
Adorned with blending
Fireflies, pulse, stirring light
Young sweet thoughts stream
Like pussy willows swaying
Warm breeze epics passion
Appreciated, adorned
Your being
Ripples of charm freely offered
Kind eye herbs, gentle voices
Giggling foolish musicals
Blushing, stammering, teaching
Embracing fluted esteem
Echo sage siblings
Maple sugar light of day
Seeps deep to the spirit
Soul writers compassion
Looking to large trees of horizon
Fruit dripping
Moist green moss world
Gathering gold circles
I believe the storyteller in my core
Openhanded attachment to wonder
Wearing child bonnets
Collective conscious
Simply arsenal….
Diamond glinted spirit world
Milestones experimentation
Verse to grace omnipotent
Touches softly haïr
Touches warmly face
Tenders ruby lips, ardent fulmination
Hunger…
Breath…..please
Be composed of the longest prose
Alive…
You are the best part of the day

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-02-05 06:58 AM


I try to get someone to understand that...
sometimes(most times) it is futile
*s
M

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