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Waiting for the glass slipper to drop CHALLENGE

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Cinderelly
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0 posted 08-14-2004 01:22 AM       View Profile for Cinderelly   Email Cinderelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderelly

I thought of these few lines but now I'm stuck . . . What can you do with them?

"but in my so called fairytale,
I wait for the glass slipper to drop."



* For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." *

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1 posted 08-16-2004 11:44 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

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Cinderelly
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2 posted 08-16-2004 08:06 PM       View Profile for Cinderelly   Email Cinderelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cinderelly

I wanted to see what poems others could write with them . . .

* For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." *

eor
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3 posted 08-20-2004 05:22 PM       View Profile for eor   Email eor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eor

but in my so called fairytale,
I wait for the glass slipper to drop

A declarable fly I'm tiny to us
Margot
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4 posted 08-31-2004 03:58 AM       View Profile for Margot   Email Margot   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Margot's Home Page   View IP for Margot

Poetic Lives

But in my so called fairytale
I wait for the glass slipper to drop
In slow motion I watch it slide
Crashing to the two-stepped dance floor
Shattering my life
Into a million pieces
Picking each up
I find corner of my soul
Words of my heart
Memories of my blessings
I find my real home

Margot Hill
31Aug04

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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5 posted 08-31-2004 02:20 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

lovely,  Margo
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