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Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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0 posted 05-12-2004 04:42 AM       View Profile for Destinys_Fallen_Angel   Email Destinys_Fallen_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Destinys_Fallen_Angel


I challenge you (any poet out there)

To write about

Fallen angels, Destiny and Fate

I'm working on this one myself and would welcome others opinions on the subject
I know this is nothing profound but i could use some help here

thanks
Destiny

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1 posted 05-21-2004 12:19 AM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

Working on it now!
Susan
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2 posted 05-22-2004 11:36 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Sounds interesting.  I'll give it a try too.

Susan

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Susan
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3 posted 05-23-2004 04:59 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Okay, how's this?


One could say we all began
As Angels fresh from Heavenís gate
Our souls still awash with Godís pure love
Not yet blemished by the hands of hate

Is it ones destiny, I ask?
When flesh and blood upon this earth
To leave behind this sweet innocence
That embodied us at birth?

Are we meant to falter?
To fall from truthís sure path
And wander about aimlessly
In Evilís aftermath?

Are we destined to become
Fallen Angels?

I believe this to be untrue
For even Fallen Angels can be found
And gifted forgivenessí sweet reprieve
From the sins in which they abound

Whether it be through Christís pure love
Or through Buddhaís guiding light
Be it of the will of Allah
Or in the Creatorís hand of might

We need only believe in Good
And live our lives as such
Let go of the failings of the flesh
And rise above its touch

Claim your right to divinity
Spread sweet love around
And Fallen Angels shall be lifted up
To soar among the clouds

Do not believe in Fate Ė Make your own.

S.A.T.


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Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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4 posted 05-23-2004 05:56 PM       View Profile for Destinys_Fallen_Angel   Email Destinys_Fallen_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Destinys_Fallen_Angel

great job i liked it, mine isnt coming along so well i'm stuck

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5 posted 05-24-2004 06:11 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

C it in main 32/ Attempted
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6 posted 05-24-2004 11:01 PM       View Profile for Destinys_Fallen_Angel   Email Destinys_Fallen_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Destinys_Fallen_Angel

juju what does C in something or other mean? can you post a link to where you posted ur poem??

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