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Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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since 2004-05-06

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Boise Idaho

0 posted 2004-05-12 04:42 AM

I challenge you (any poet out there)

To write about

Fallen angels, Destiny and Fate

I'm working on this one myself and would welcome others opinions on the subject
I know this is nothing profound but i could use some help here

thanks
Destiny

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timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

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1 posted 2004-05-21 12:19 PM

Working on it now!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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2 posted 2004-05-22 11:36 PM

Sounds interesting. I'll give it a try too.

Susan

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Susan
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3 posted 2004-05-23 04:59 PM

Okay, how's this?

One could say we all began
As Angels fresh from Heaven’s gate
Our souls still awash with God’s pure love
Not yet blemished by the hands of hate

Is it ones destiny, I ask?
When flesh and blood upon this earth
To leave behind this sweet innocence
That embodied us at birth?

Are we meant to falter?
To fall from truth’s sure path
And wander about aimlessly
In Evil’s aftermath?

Are we destined to become
Fallen Angels?

I believe this to be untrue
For even Fallen Angels can be found
And gifted forgiveness’ sweet reprieve
From the sins in which they abound

Whether it be through Christ’s pure love
Or through Buddha’s guiding light
Be it of the will of Allah
Or in the Creator’s hand of might

We need only believe in Good
And live our lives as such
Let go of the failings of the flesh
And rise above its touch

Claim your right to divinity
Spread sweet love around
And Fallen Angels shall be lifted up
To soar among the clouds

Do not believe in Fate – Make your own.

S.A.T.

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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since 2004-05-06

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Boise Idaho

4 posted 2004-05-23 05:56 PM

great job i liked it, mine isnt coming along so well i'm stuck

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

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5 posted 2004-05-24 06:11 PM

C it in main 32/ Attempted
Juju

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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since 2004-05-06

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Boise Idaho

6 posted 2004-05-24 11:01 PM

juju what does C in something or other mean? can you post a link to where you posted ur poem??

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