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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden


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I am your imagination and your patience
I wonder what tomorrow may bring
I hear the wheels inside your head
I see something blurred by your windows.

I pretend that I am helpless
I feel that I am lost
I touch my confusion
I worry that I may never grow up
I cry when you break my heart
I am your imagination and your patience.

I understand that no one is perfect
I say that someday I will fly
I dream that I might be able to let go
I try so hard not to break your heart
I hope that you will understand that
I am your imagination and your patience.
Welp.. yes.
Allysa
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1 posted 09-10-2003 03:05 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

i must say this is the product of me listening to Neil Young's "cowgirl in the sand.."  dunno why, i just felt compelled to tell you all that.
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Somewhere... out there...


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I love this, Allysa.  Very nicely done.

Now...you should post this in Open, so
it will be seen by more people.
 
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