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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 09-09-2003 01:22 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

(chuckling) I have no idea why, but I became fascinated with screen wire as an image of seperation and of how it abrades things softer than itself...

write me a poem using the image of screen wire in some way....

please?

thank u


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1 posted 09-09-2003 03:04 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Well I don't have a poem yet, but to tide you over, I thought I'd tell you one of my favorite jokes ('tis a groaner, too)

You heard about the guy who ran right through the screen door?

(Everybody say this all together) "No, what happened?"

He strained himself.

*chuckle and wince*

Miss me much?

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2 posted 09-09-2003 03:10 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

yeah... miss you much!

now go write me a thoughtful poem using screen wire as an image... and I might share with you the one I am thinking about.

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4 posted 09-09-2003 04:48 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Well met K.... I expected no less from you
now..instead of weaving it into the story, make it the story.. or the metaphor...
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5 posted 09-09-2003 05:58 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

erm...I can't write it today..I am mysteriously alergic to screen wires and I have this horrible tendancy of saying I will do a challenge and then not doing it..so..I'll watch ya. hums...

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
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6 posted 09-09-2003 06:32 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

cluck, cluck cluck...



thought I heard a chicken... must have been my imagination...


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you're a brat.

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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8 posted 09-09-2003 07:09 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

(smoooch!)

uh huh... and your point?

LOL
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9 posted 09-09-2003 07:37 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

lol...I haven't been able to write anything lately. umm..yeah. I have a reason for this

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
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There you are, Sir Task Master...
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11 posted 09-10-2003 11:38 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

My humble offering, Capt. Ron....
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12 posted 09-10-2003 01:46 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Very well done you two! certainly enjoyed both..and appreciate you two taking a moment or two to try your hand at the challenge..

any more takers????

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Where's Serenity?  
Where's Local Reb?  
Where's Wranx?
Brian?
porch puppy?
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14 posted 09-10-2003 05:41 PM       View Profile for Jason Lyle   Email Jason Lyle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jason Lyle

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Jason

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (09-10-2003 05:42 PM).]

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15 posted 09-10-2003 05:43 PM       View Profile for Jason Lyle   Email Jason Lyle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jason Lyle

Well I tried, my muse has been a little evasive lately

Jason
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well done Jason.. I'd say your muse lacked nothing when you wrote this!


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pourch puppy told me his coputer crashed. so..yeah. he was gone for a while. lol..I like reading these

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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18 posted 09-11-2003 12:07 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

ok gimme a few with this one Ron
hmm screen wire . . .
*sneaky*
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19 posted 09-11-2003 09:05 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Wind... the porch puppy and I change e-mails regularly... I know he is being the usual slacker/pain in the hiney he usually is, and is probably watching cartoons right now and eating a bowl of fruit loops instead of getting ready to go to work like he should... how can you take a guy like that and expect him to take time from his busy schedule to write something about screen wire??? Just doesn't make sense does it? He's got to walk the dog and all.. when do we expect him to write??

I'll tell you... JM is far too hard on the poor fellow... calling him a porch puppy and all... One of these days he'll probably stroke out from the stress he works in if he isn't careful.. I think we all need to be kinder to him..and more considerate of his feelings.. after all... there but for the grace of god goes me..



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Littlewing...
take you time.. ( chuckling) but I would love to see how you weave the imagery into the challenge...

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"Piece of cake"
And thanks for the idea . . . I needed that.

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22 posted 09-11-2003 05:52 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

quite evident after reading your offering that it was indeed a piece of cake for you...
challenge well met sir.. and thank you for playing along... I enjoyed your view...

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HA HA HA  
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heh..and you find this funny..why?

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

 
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