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Cpat Hair
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50 posted 09-12-2003 10:38 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Dunc..I think you may have created a masterpiece.. now you forgot to make it a love poem though...

how about..

Ocean ocean through my screen
you keep me from the beauty it seems
and though my love is on the other side
she will not be back till next rising tide
could the smell of fish long dead, indeed,
remind me of the thing my love I need?

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51 posted 09-12-2003 10:38 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

quote:
Fine, I'm going back to the porch and pout


whoa..that was almost an alliteration lmao

see Ron...he'll do anything to get out of writing LMAO

hey Dunc...dont go away mad..just go away.





( ya know I love ya, you ole flea bitten porch puppy)


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52 posted 09-12-2003 10:39 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

I think you two should be locked up in a room together...LMAO..one with soft walls and strong locks..
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53 posted 09-12-2003 10:43 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

yeah...thats a good idea Ron..then I could read him my tigerboy poetry OUTLOUD!!!


lmao
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54 posted 09-12-2003 10:45 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

"I could read him my tigerboy poetry OUTLOUD"

Somebody kill me now!!!!!!!!!!!
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55 posted 09-12-2003 10:47 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

(chuckling) Where is Wind??? She could supervise the two of you and make sure Dunc paid attention....

go write you two... something about screen... and I want it to be a collaboration between the two of you!!!
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56 posted 09-12-2003 10:48 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

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57 posted 09-12-2003 10:50 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Ya know Ron...a screen fetish is really kinky when ya think about it.

LMAO
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58 posted 09-12-2003 10:50 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

whats next..duct tape???
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59 posted 09-12-2003 10:52 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

JM..you start in on me and I'll cut off all ocean poetry I write and instead begin a series of poems dedicated to the emotional bond between you and Duncan...

kinky... lol... you are a mess...

now the two of you go write something together!!
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60 posted 09-12-2003 10:52 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Ok, throw in the duct tape and we'll write ya one Ron.
Jams, i'll meet ya on the porch.  Leave the tigerboy in the yard!!!!!!
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61 posted 09-12-2003 10:55 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

LMAO.....Yeah Ron, you do that!!!  
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62 posted 09-12-2003 10:57 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

series of poems dedicated to the emotional bond between you and Duncan...
===========================

LMAO.... those will be Haikus!! ROFL
was that emotional bond or irrational bonds?

LMAO...
Ron, you forget----
Im not blonde enough for Duncan   hehe

and besides...hes allergic to my tigerboyeeee poetry.
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63 posted 09-12-2003 10:59 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Me thinks she does protest too much..
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64 posted 09-12-2003 11:06 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

JM..you start in on me and I'll cut off all ocean poetry I write
======================

Oh man....why ya gotta play hardball. LOL
OK OK...the moth will be good. (oxymoron)

Dont take me ocean poetry away...
I'll behave-- SEE----

anyone buying this???

Ok..the moth has to go fax a letter at Kinkos...(Kinky?) LOL

you porch puppy poets play nice.
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65 posted 09-12-2003 11:29 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I had to pick myself off the floor from the shock of it all, Pup...quit waving that quintessential fine finger at me!  Start pawing out a poem, pronto! [The alliteration was for JM...]
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66 posted 09-12-2003 04:27 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Liz's scientific obserations

                                            The dog and cat theory

Subject: pourch puppy and dancing tiger
Observations: puppy seems to be showing agressive behavior.
Hypothesis: subject is easily distracted and has short attention span, causing it to act impulsively.
Conclusion: yep..that pretty much sums it up

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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67 posted 09-12-2003 04:31 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

"sit dog! bad dog!"

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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68 posted 09-12-2003 04:36 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

LMAO..I knew you could control him Wind... now why don't you get him to write something with you... you'll have to cajole him I expect, but perhaps you can get him off his lazy porch puppy butt long enough to try..

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69 posted 09-12-2003 04:51 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


ROFL @ this thread...and?...EVERYONE knows that
tigers are better than dogs!  *winks to the moth*

Was just popping in to say that I AM working
on this one...got me thinkin' and I like that.
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70 posted 09-12-2003 04:55 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

about time you showed up VL... thought we were going to have to send out some sort of dragnet and get you in here...

I look forward to reading your offering... soon I hope???

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71 posted 09-12-2003 05:09 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

I don't remember signing a release for my pschological profile to be distributed in this thread Dr. Wind!!  (Don't you have some homework to do?)  
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72 posted 09-12-2003 07:50 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

It's a friday. whatdaya expect?

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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Aww shucks, Ron...I didn't know you cared...

Yes...soon...very soon...
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74 posted 09-12-2003 09:08 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

hey Cpat? Dunc wants me to do a 'phsycic anyalasis' of you. lol...he thinks I'm ignoring him. heh

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

 
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