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0 posted 2003-07-25 11:05 PM


I have a great idea  

Take an emotion and run with it . . .
If you write dark and brooding, write of the emotion happy, if you write happy and romantic, write of the emotion dark and brooding.
  
Pleeeease??

It will be such an adventure . . .

Oh, I am not included in this btw
my writings start out happy and end sad
so I do this all the time
LOL

have fun
I will be watching
xxoo

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1 posted 2003-07-25 11:11 PM


Are you talking to ME?

(pause)

ARE YOU...talking to ME?

(looks over shoulder)

Y'must be talking to me, cause there's no one else here.

smile.

I'm game. Give me an emotion?
I'll see if I can locate it.

But you ARE NOT out of this game.

smile.

I see yer bet, and raise ya ten.

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2 posted 2003-07-26 12:35 PM


Toss me one - I gave you spite  

Ms. De Niro  

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3 posted 2003-07-26 12:41 PM


Hope.
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4 posted 2003-07-26 06:15 AM


as in?

Hope I'm not banned for writing spite?

cha-da-ta!

(serenity exits, doing the soft-shoe...)

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5 posted 2003-07-26 07:39 AM


what...mimic someone else's style? That would be...like against my ethics..or somethin. Ah well...what are ya talking about?
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6 posted 2003-07-26 08:22 AM


HOPE?  God, you are a tough teacher
this will take me time . . .
(I'll get you and your little dog too)

Liz, I mean sometimes you can catch a certain style of someones writing.
It is up to you . . . take an emotion and run with it . . .
I gave Karen spite, she gave me hope

Write of something you normally wouldnt, couldnt or never have.

Better yet, I'll toss one at you . . .

SPLENDOR

hah!


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7 posted 2003-07-26 08:27 AM


what if you dont have a style? oh wait? me write love poetry... I only write heartbreak poetry...haha..I'll try to be happy

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8 posted 2003-07-26 08:27 AM


Naw wind...

just asking everybody to step outside the box of the usual a bit.

For example?

If you were to answer the challenge?

I would ask you to remember the most joyful moment of your life and write about it. WITHOUT GOING DARK.

That simple.



You game?

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9 posted 2003-07-26 08:29 AM


sigh..i suppose
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10 posted 2003-07-26 08:29 AM


damn sue..splendor is GOOD.

chuckle.


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11 posted 2003-07-26 08:30 AM


I'm off..to try and write somethin happy
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12 posted 2003-07-26 08:31 AM


YES exactly, I should explain it better up there . . . I will go change
hehehe splendor - ahahah that was evil  

Keep tossin the emotions out there guys, choose your own, or ask for one here  - name it that and my challenge

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13 posted 2003-07-26 09:02 AM


sigh...I've done the dirty deed...come to think..I'd love to see Ethel write something sad and disturbing..

(that was really, really hard. And my poem isn't even that happy)

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14 posted 2003-07-26 09:16 AM


Fine Ser- innocence at age seven is close enough

Wind exits..mocking Serentity's soft-shoe

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15 posted 2003-07-26 09:35 AM


serenity enters...takes a bow...and exits...mocking wind's mockery of serenity's soft-shoe?

what???

c'mon wind?

what's up with that?

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OK Sue...throw something at me...
[outside the box, she says...sheesh...]

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17 posted 2003-07-26 09:44 AM


heh. Sunshine- write something dreary and depressing

Wind exits- mocking serenity's mockery of Wind's mockery of Serenity's soft-shoe

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18 posted 2003-07-26 09:54 AM


You are now a witch of the first degree.

All hail and welcome, Wind, the keeper of yes, Raphael (ask him)

now...we need just two more corners before we can be BAD ASS...

chuckle.

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19 posted 2003-07-26 09:59 AM


But....I don't really have a form...looking down at myself in frown....what does one do then?   You guys are all too good! hugs, Chris
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20 posted 2003-07-26 10:08 AM


interesting...
BRING IT ON
I'm flatered. Haha. Wait? when did he say that? he has this way of talking to people without telling me

Nighshade's style is personal...a lot of memories. Write something cold..aloof and impersonal. Or cruel. Thats going out of your style

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21 posted 2003-07-26 10:08 AM


May I, Sue?

Chris?

Your assignment (should you decide to accept it) will be to write your darkest, most hormonal day. (For a true writing experience? Try this both BEFORE and AFTER your period.)

grin.

This message will NOT self-destruct in eight seconds. Much to Mr. Carnell's chagrin.

heh heh.

(love ya ronnie baby!)

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22 posted 2003-07-26 10:17 AM


Ser? you are never in login..are you one of those ghosts or something?
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23 posted 2003-07-26 10:25 AM


Okay, what am I supposed to write about...one of mine and Gary's arguments??I never write about those. No, I'm just kidding.

What emotion that I don't ususally write about? Jealousy is what pops into my head. I mean really vindictive and absolutely hateful jealousy...insane jealousy. I've got something in mind.

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24 posted 2003-07-26 10:27 AM


you never write about insanity either. Like to see you write something about insanity

insane jelousy? I like it

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25 posted 2003-07-26 10:29 AM


Wind?

I am not a ghost.

I am simply the UNDEAD.

chuckle.

Y'know the type...

I guess there is some porch puppy in me, afterall....

and ethel?

hmmm...

two choices.

Both passion.

something for Gary?

Or something for Gary?
Your choice.


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26 posted 2003-07-26 10:32 AM


Ok Karilea . . . hmmmm

Despair

Chris:

ahahah good one K
yes

The idea is to write what you dont

and yes, I too want to see a nice dark juicy write from Ethel

here are some more if you want:

Bliss
Angst
Splendor
Disgust
Fear
Regret
Religious undertones in writing ( this is for WRANX - yes - you must - is the only way - it isnt even an emotion!)
Love
Sadness
Grief
Lust
Revenge
Peace

add on if you see fit . . .
and it must be different than what you write
sad takes happy
happy takes sad

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27 posted 2003-07-26 10:33 AM


what? all of her poems are passion for Gary...

I see dead people.

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28 posted 2003-07-26 10:34 AM


Jealousy - good one Ethel


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29 posted 2003-07-26 10:34 AM


smile

I LOVE WIND.

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Despair.

This is going to take some work.

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31 posted 2003-07-26 10:40 AM


Doesn't everyone?

   where's my technical staff?


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32 posted 2003-07-26 10:51 AM


sigh.

I'm having the period from Hell.



Is there a tech crew for THAT?

damn.

hmmm.

sounds good to me....

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33 posted 2003-07-26 10:58 AM


Wind aproaches with caution

"psstt. Ser. thanks for the warning

there there "

insanity is not a crime

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34 posted 2003-07-26 10:59 AM


/pip/Forum80/HTML/003446.html

OK kidlets.  Give it your critique.

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35 posted 2003-07-26 11:29 AM


ok, so everyone knows,  I love to write about love so here....I have one of the opposite for you.... /pip/Forum80/HTML/003448.html
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36 posted 2003-07-26 11:46 AM


Karen!! I don't have any hormones anymore!!!!    Hmmmm....in a way it is a good thing....in another...   Now what can I write about???????
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I don't count do I!? cos I write sappy love poems that turn out depressing or vice versa lol...I have no inspiration..hey Sue how about you love me and leave me type of thing to inspire me!? cheat on me or something lmao..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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38 posted 2003-07-26 11:53 AM


lol. write about your obssesion with feet.
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39 posted 2003-07-26 01:11 PM


chris?

then you must write about your LACK of hormones!!!

(we ARE damned when we do and doomed when we don't, eh?)



and Ceinwyn?

You must write of faeries and leprachauns.

and please lovie? may they all live happily ever after?

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40 posted 2003-07-26 01:28 PM


aheem: Wind enters.

Ser and Chris? why do you think I'm mad at you? trust me, if I was, i'd tell you. Its fine..really

Wind exits

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41 posted 2003-07-26 01:37 PM



All right, Karen...ya got me here.
Now, throw something at me...I dare ya!*grin*


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42 posted 2003-07-26 01:59 PM


Okay, here it is....totally unlike what I
usually write about me and Gary. And it sure
was hard to write. I love to write about
our  looooovvveee!!
But, ya'll didn't know that already, did you??  

Anyway, here's the little dilly... /pip/Forum80/HTML/003455.html


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43 posted 2003-07-26 03:02 PM


Awesome you guys
*sneaking away from her write quietly*

Chris - DISGUST
there ya go

Vicki - REVENGE

ahahah . . .

hey umm where are all the dark writers?

Ok I have a special assignment then

Raph - this is not an emotion but you get
BELIEF ( and you cant use God and it has to be something good)

Brian LP - hmmm . . . TRUST (happy now)

Bri?  the MUNDANE (just because I never see apples and oranges from you)

Dix?  SPLENDOR

Come on guys, I have to do HOPE!
That has got to be the worst one

I am loving seeing all of this
thank you so much!
xxoo


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44 posted 2003-07-26 03:06 PM


haha..they all saw how sappy mine was and decided to avoid it -

what is the oposite of depression?

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45 posted 2003-07-26 03:21 PM


Sigh. I should have done splendor. In fact? I will. because you can find that anywhere..I shall return with a good poem.

Wind exits..thinking about something beautiful

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46 posted 2003-07-26 03:40 PM


Anxiety . . .

Liz . . . yours was great - you did the challenge - but God I just did mine
wait till you see, Christ

avoiding this HUH?

scaredy cats . . .
plbbhht!  

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what is my word?
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48 posted 2003-07-26 04:07 PM


lol..I did another one. That is much better. Really, it is. ...

as for you..being saved

little wingie..it was good. Really. don't be so hard on yerself...ahh well.

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49 posted 2003-07-26 05:19 PM


Helen - Laughter

(you can write it any way you like -
just express this emotion)
COOL


Liz thank you
yours was good too
very much so

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/pip/Forum80/HTML/003473.html

OK, so Serenity wants some Francis Farmer.  Again, feel free to critique.

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51 posted 2003-07-26 07:48 PM


Sueeeee!? I have to do faeries and lil green irish men Karen!? this is possible pass me my Guinness and It shall be done

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Um...Sue?  You must know me better than I thought..LOL.

Revenge is probably the most challenging thing
you could have chosen for me.  It's one of the
few that I've never even attempted to write.
I know 'hurt'...I know 'angry'...I don't KNOW 'revenge'. LOL

In other words?...you're good!    

This may take a little time...but I WILL do it.

*walks away, trying not to 'think' too hard*
Must go SHAKE...or is that, get naked and THEN shake?
I get SO confused...*grin*

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lol...I actualy liked the second one...I never knew how hard it was for me to write happy. Well actualy..I used to. Wonder what happened?

Our Vicky's out for revenge-against Sue..
for she has ofered a challenge that is too much to resist

Ceinwyn- have fun lassie ...

working on my warning signs...

Danger: disturbance ahead

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54 posted 2003-07-26 08:28 PM


Riley- i see ya in login.. when you read this..you have to write about a mental impairment check your email too

(now were did that bunny get to??

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55 posted 2003-07-26 08:47 PM


Okay Sue....I did it and it ain't pretty...it's pretty disgusting...ha ha ha..get it.. /pip/Forum80/HTML/003480.html   I almost made myself sick with memories. Thank goodness I have lots of snacks in the house to settle my tummy!
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Well, I've been off for a while and when I come back I find out that they don't like me being jealous and hateful.  LOL...it's already on the second page, with only 5 replies. HaHa!!! They just know it's not true, or they think I've gone crazy???
Haahahahahahahaha

I bet if I wrote something really dark and gruesome, nobody at all would read it because they would think I was really off my rocker. HaHa!!

Actually, I wasn't thinking of Gary when I wrote this. Ya'll knew that, though, didn't you?

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57 posted 2003-07-27 12:13 PM


Kris - you can have FAITH

Chris ahahahahah LMAOOOOOOO
I am so sorry - I never would have given it to you . . .

Vicki - eheheheheheheheh

Karilea - BEAUTIFUL!

Ethel - bull - it is awesome and I am going to breathe it right now - the boards are just nutso - I have no idea who started this stuff
*exiting quickly at Karen's heel*  

Thank you so much everyone
xxoo

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58 posted 2003-07-27 12:25 PM


Hey Sue, thanks for breathing on the poem! LOL
It really is fun reading all these completely different writes of everyone else.
It just was a lot different to write. LOL
But, give me another one, somebody, to do tomorrow.
I've got a bad sinus headache and am going to
bed early (??) for a change.
Good night and dream sweet dreams, everybody.  

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59 posted 2003-07-27 01:24 AM


Ok...Lessee...

wranx writing something with NO religious undertone or reference

Hmmmmm...

Here goes!


Mary had a little lamb, it's flee....DRAT!

Already screwed it up!....TWICE!
(damnedlittlewingmumblegrumble)

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60 posted 2003-07-27 01:52 AM


ahahahahahaha . . .  you tried Ed
*smile*
damnededmumblegrumble

Ethel . . . you did beautifully!
and yw

Wind, yes - I am breathing the second one now -

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/pip/Forum80/HTML/003501.html

What did you start, Sue?

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Okay, I'm ready for another unhappy  *ugh!!*  word.
You got another for me, Sue?


Pssst...this is kinda fun...hard to write, but definitely a challenge!!

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63 posted 2003-07-27 02:51 PM


Ethel..intolerance

ahh..back to reality

E? on the second page with 5 replys? gosh..I always though that was a lot


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64 posted 2003-07-27 04:10 PM


Karilea . . . is a good thing
wish more the brooding ones would get in here and try
YES I am talking to you guys!

But I did love your out of the box
thank you

Ethel oooooh thats a good word Liz

and Liz - no look it has more replies

Thank you again guys
xxoo  

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65 posted 2003-07-27 05:31 PM


least "Ethel" word I could think of..

I'd like to see another one from Mr. supernova

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66 posted 2003-07-27 07:57 PM


Ok, throw me an emotion. But I warn you, if you give me happiness or something like that, I'll have to wait until I'm 18 to post it.

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

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67 posted 2003-07-27 08:09 PM


ehhh... not sure what your main emotion is i shall let Sue do this one
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68 posted 2003-07-27 08:26 PM


Here you go.... A perfect example of my writing.... lol

Drowning

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

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69 posted 2003-07-27 08:30 PM


hope or confedence

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70 posted 2003-07-27 08:31 PM


Hope? Darn.... LOL.... well, it's certainly a challenge.... I'll see what I can come up with.

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

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71 posted 2003-07-27 08:33 PM


Liz - I was just reading Kielo and LMAO yes yes HOPE indeed - good call
you watching thse boards for me and reading my mind - thank you

I had to do hope - wasnt easy

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72 posted 2003-07-27 08:52 PM


ahem? did you know the opposite of slendor is ugliness? what are ya trying to say littlewing?

K-Hope you survive this challenge

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73 posted 2003-07-27 08:57 PM


Believe me, Wind, I'm praying.

I think you're both sadistic. lol

Kielo

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74 posted 2003-07-27 09:30 PM


*sigh* Ok, I did it. It's in Open.

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

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75 posted 2003-07-27 09:45 PM


:riley enters sits, and then exits again: muahahaha! i am the all knowing and i am always lurking, and

wind, a mental impairment ( excuse the spelling ) hmph


riley

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76 posted 2003-07-27 10:10 PM


I wanna play, but i cant decide what to dooooooo yet.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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77 posted 2003-07-27 10:21 PM


Kielo - awesome job!
Hope was tough

Liz - you evil thing
No, silly I was thanking you for watching

Gem - hmmm this is a toughie

FRIGHT

I havent seen this from you


Liz, Riley needs a word

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78 posted 2003-07-27 10:25 PM


I like this game! Do I get to play again? lol....

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

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79 posted 2003-07-27 11:01 PM


you can play as many times as you want . . .
and Gem, you can come up with your own as well . . .

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80 posted 2003-07-27 11:26 PM


I don't have a style, and I think that I've written about just about every emotion I've ever gone through... but I'm game *grin*

Gimme a good one


*sits patiently*

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81 posted 2003-07-28 12:20 PM


LUST  ehehehehe
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I might have to post it in MC *grin*
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83 posted 2003-07-28 01:08 AM


I was thinking the same thing - LOL just let everyone know where it is
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84 posted 2003-07-28 02:06 AM


Oh, come on. Don't give her lust. That's too easy! Give her something really difficult.... like.... self-discovery/love....

Ok, someone give me one. I'm praying that Skyfire doesn't get to this first. She knows me too well, lol

Kielo

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85 posted 2003-07-28 09:22 AM


Ahem. Wind enters with the thesaurasis..(not the dictonary )

Riley- Joy

Gem-...Fear (yes, i know your dark but ya haven't done fear yet)

Keilo- obsession..mwahahah

Skyfire-....whatever keilo says. she's your manager

Wind exits, doin the soft-shoe


insanity is not a crime

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86 posted 2003-07-28 09:26 AM


lol..didn't notice ya had allready assighned Gem. i suppose great minds think alike... and not so great ones. but we are good

(wow..you said like the same thing as me Gem, I've found someone else's mind i can read...

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Lust is tough to write of - especially to keep it in Open and JOY!  You are evil Liz, that is a tough one

I cant give love or self - discovery - we have all written of that.  

Liz. sheilding mind now . . .
heh


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88 posted 2003-07-28 11:32 AM


evil ,evil thing....is joy now my assigned topic? goody......

riley exits with her current writers block to go write! help me


riley

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

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89 posted 2003-07-28 11:47 AM


Thanks sue n liz...I can get me teeth into this one..I'll get started.

so..fear/fright here i come!...as if It's ever left me alone.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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90 posted 2003-07-28 12:00 PM


hehe..

Joy to the world,
Riley is here,
And Gemma's died of fear..

lalalalalalalala blahblahblahblahblahbalahblahblah
And on and on it goes..and on and on it goes..

And Kielo's got and obssesion with toes

(Where did that come from..I'm innocent)

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91 posted 2003-07-28 12:23 PM


No, no, no.... I want Skyfire to write about self-love, and possibly tie self-discovery into it.

And obsession? I'm up for it. I'll see what I can do.

Kielo

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92 posted 2003-07-28 01:21 PM


hmph....yes the greta poetess riley has arrived!


riley

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

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93 posted 2003-07-28 01:43 PM


I do want another...

sigh

please, suh? may I have anuthuh?

(I know...ain't that pitiful? tsk...)

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94 posted 2003-07-28 02:30 PM


Karen M'Lady let me do the honors please

PEACE heh

Gem - saw your write - your best yet truly
yw


Riley had JOY
Kielo has OBSESSION
Sky has LUST

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95 posted 2003-07-28 03:48 PM


LOVED gem's poem...

insanity is not a crime

i get you two mixed up...potato pototo..skyfire Kielo..

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96 posted 2003-07-28 03:50 PM


Ok, she can have lust. She would hate me if you changed it anyway.

I'll have it done in a week, because I'm going to be away until then. I'll see you on Monday!

Kielo

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97 posted 2003-07-28 05:13 PM


heh... obsession. I'm terrible

insanity is not a crime

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OK Sue - awaiting the next "word".
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99 posted 2003-07-28 08:15 PM


I admit it, I cheated. I've already done this one.... Here it is, anyway.

My Everything

Taste the ardor in my blood
as I spill it for you.
Do you still not understand?
You are my all,
my everything.


Take my virtue and submission.
What should you do with them?
Why, anything -
you are my all,
my everything.


Hear my silent screams,
my agony at your betrayal.
Do you still not understand?
You are my all,
my everything.


Yup, there it is. Enjoy.... or not....

Kielo

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i have attempted...it is in open....it isn't good at all!!!


riley

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101 posted 2003-07-28 10:32 PM


serenity enters...grumbling...

Sue? You may have just stumped the band...

Peace, huh?

I've done a lot of damage to myself trying to access THAT one...



serenity exits...grumbling...

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102 posted 2003-07-29 03:24 AM


Kielo - have you posted that! it's amazing!!!!!!!!

K - you gave me HOPE - that was pretty bad -sorry - it popped in my head just like in Ghostbusters . . . you know the Stay Puff Marshmallow man . . . if it is really going to be hurtful - then dont write it ok?

Riley - you out did yourself - I loved it - thank you

Karilea, a glutton for punishment
hmm . . . PREJUDICE

God, I am evil

Someone has to give one to me, I am starting to feel bad


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Prejudice?

Oh Lordy.

This will take longer than the others.

I'll see what I can do!  

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104 posted 2003-07-29 09:58 AM


someone has to give one to littlewing. Who could be worse than her? hahaha I need time to THINK (woah..scary word) about thhis one

insanity is not a crime

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105 posted 2003-07-29 11:51 AM


thinking is a scary word, no doubt, while its summer, that is about the scariest word in the book!!!


::riley exits shaking::

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

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/pip/Forum80/HTML/003635.html

Probably not what you wanted, Sue...but as close as I could come without losing my soul....

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107 posted 2003-07-29 02:19 PM


Karilea - it is beautiful, I never expected to see predjudice done so beautifully
Thank you

Liz,  I have poofy powers , be careful with that word LOL

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That one was not easy, Sue...I am sure someone else could do that word more justice than I did.  Having been raised in a world of NO prejudice, and even though I see it in others all the time, I just couldn't gnaw on that bone.

Throw me another?

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109 posted 2003-07-29 03:50 PM


your crazy it was amazing!
If I would have written of it
it would have come out sounding
bigoted or forced.

OK I am randomly flipping through
the dictionary  . . .

ok the first one was occultism -
nope wrong word . . .  
let me get the thesaurus . . .

INTRIGUE

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Now, I CAN do

intrigue!

Perhaps even get seren out of her books and into the forums...


LOL...

now, no reposts, yes?  Because I have one that is er, intriguing, an oldie but a goodie...

heh...I may "link" it here and do another one anyway!

/pip/Forum69/HTML/002155.html

so here's the oldie but goodie...I'll come up with something new...just for you.

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Sue?

I'm thinking you want

conspiracy

v.

fascination.

Correct?

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/pip/Forum80/HTML/003655.html
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Karilea, I haven't gone to Open yet. I haven't been on this afternoon. But, I read your "oldie" just then, and that is amazing. How can you do that?  It is so beautiful.

Sue, I have my poem wrote....have since yesterday. I don't like it very much, but I'm going to post it after I read some.

Think of another word for me, okay? This one was more of a challenge than the other, I think. Like Karilea said, probably someone else could do "intolerance" better, because I am pretty toloerant most of the time.

Anyway, give me another word, okay?

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114 posted 2003-07-29 09:33 PM


Ethel posted her lovely poem in open I enjoyed it E, don't be so hard on yourself

insanity is not a crime

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Thanks, Liz. I tried.  

This is it...... /pip/Forum80/HTML/003666.html

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116 posted 2003-07-29 10:23 PM


Karilea - thank you for the link - mannn you should repost that one
and please write any way you see fit
with these words = thats what the challenge is for - what you see

Ethel - it was PERFECT thank you

Liz - where is my word?
Shall I make my own?
Somebody give me a word please LOL


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Sue?...your word is PATIENCE.

*Vicky exits...quite pleased with herself*

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118 posted 2003-07-30 02:57 AM


grin.

glad it ain't MINE...

now hurry up, will ya Sue?

can't wait to see yer answer to the challenge!


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119 posted 2003-07-30 08:48 AM


Oh Christ - the both of you are gonna get it - I have none of this in my blood whatsoever . . .

*flipping through dictionary to see the definition of such word*

Touche
LMAO

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120 posted 2003-07-30 09:52 AM


Where is my word?? And please  don't give me patience, too.
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121 posted 2003-07-30 10:14 AM


Ok mine is there . . . in Open

Ethel . . .  BEWILDERMENT

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122 posted 2003-07-30 02:37 PM


I'm trying to be good see?

nonono..Ethel needs something like DISTRUST


insanity is not a crime

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Thanks, Sue. That one doesn't sound quite so hard. I'll see what I can do with it.


Liz, you are being  very good!!
Are you feeling okay??

(just kidding, little friend)  

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124 posted 2003-07-30 02:54 PM


Why yes Ethel, I am ever so fine. Thank you ever so much for asking

insanity is not a crime

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125 posted 2003-07-31 12:54 PM


Wind, I didn't even see your post up there above mine until just then.....and I said that you were being good??  

I didn't know you had gave me another word, and I wrote one on "bewilderment". I'll post it tomorrow because I just posted one for Karen's new challenge.

I'll try to write one on "distrust", too, though. I already have an idea for that one.  

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126 posted 2003-07-31 11:15 AM


Thank you everyone for participating in this challenge - I have seen so much beautiful poetry arise from it and have learned a lot about myself . . .
Vicki ummm where is Vengeance?
Thought you would sneak away from that one huh? LOL

Lets go see the other challenges
All of you have proven to yourselves that you can write whatever your heart desires
Thank you
Sue
xxoo

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127 posted 2003-07-31 11:30 AM


did I miss it???  am I too late?????

can I write about Jealousy? :-)~

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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/pip/Forum80/HTML/003794.html

Hey, I just posted my Bewilderment poem.
Didn't know it was over?

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129 posted 2003-07-31 01:49 PM


Shw wants us to move to Ser's challenge...didn't know we had a schelual

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130 posted 2003-07-31 03:34 PM


Kristie - of course you can - anyone can do this challenge for as long as they want and Ethel - let me go see yours now - thank you


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131 posted 2003-07-31 05:04 PM


It ain't over till it's over.

And I like BOTH challenges--one gets ya to think OUTSIDE the box and the other is to get ya back in--

and yes, Wind? I like your color challenge idea too, I was reading some interesting stuff on Buddhist color interpretation...hmmm...we all seem to be on the same cloud.

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132 posted 2003-07-31 05:13 PM


yeah..gotta wait till it cools down in here. I go to open and am ovewhelmed by all the "littlewing's challenge" and "serenity's" challenges and "I Am" challenges. So I shall be patient. evil, evil word lalala..nothings happening

I am being VERY good..for me anyway I havent picked on anyone for a day

insanity is not a crime

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Okay, as always I am fashionably late...

but, I am going to try this Sue.

I never write DARK, so let me see what I come up with!

I will send you link when it is finished!

Tima

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134 posted 2003-08-30 03:47 PM


emotional runaway
that's what I am anyway
so don't be too surprised
if you read something from me
that may leave
skid marks

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Hey, Sue...sorry I didn't follow through with this one.

I tried...I really, really did...but?...
alas...vengeance is not mine...*grin*


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