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0 posted 06-18-2003 11:40 PM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo


OK Guys and Gals,
Let's see what happens with this one...
Instead of writing about a subject, or going with the first line, how about writing something based on the LAST line...

Here's my suggestion:
"And, listening to the wind, walked away"

Good Writing.

Day after day I'm more confused,
So I look for the light through the pouring rain...

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1 posted 06-25-2003 09:23 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I must decline,
for this challenge is to great,
I will listen,
but not partake,
A girl who calls herself wind,
is to troubled right now,
she will listen,
ask her anything and she will listen
and listening, the wind walked away

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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Y'know, you've got to love Wind's sense of humor...
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3 posted 06-26-2003 08:54 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

heh

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (06-26-2003 09:58 PM).]

 
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