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A follow up on my original challenge

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0 posted 04-04-2003 09:32 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind


remeber the 'don't waste a word' challenge? I have constructed a follow up of it

ten lines
choose tree words that must be repeated every line
But other than the 3 repeated words, you cannot repeat any others. however, you can use the words in a different for (blow, blew as an example)

example:

the wind blew,
wind blowing the fear away,
Wind song, blows the sadness away,
A moth caught in the blowing winds,
fell to the ground, tears streaked the blowing wind......

Wow, thats hard...


(haha, try this one!)


Never be normal!

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1 posted 04-07-2003 12:33 AM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

I don't think I know enough tree words for this one.
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2 posted 04-10-2003 10:23 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

let me give this one a try

my word will be fall


leaves fall like tears
from a tree such as falling from heaven
here has a love fallen on a branch
exceding from the falling love birds
that crash through the branches as they fall
for what seems like eternity they fall
banging their heads each time a leaf falls
its like a love that fell into your life
burning them selfs on the falling acid rain
this is what its like falling in love


probably didn't do it right, o well gave it a try
 
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