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morefiah
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since 2003-03-26
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Spanish Town, Jamaica

0 posted 2003-04-02 05:08 PM





Do you remember us
sitting in the sand,
wavelets caressing our toes
watching the wings
of far off sailboats
chasing the wind?

Can you remember
Hermit crabs
crawling across feet
as the sun painted
masterpieces across the sky
while we watched spellbound

I remember hugging you
and feeling what back then
I could not put words to:
the intense, protective love
of five year old big brother
for three year old tyke

smile down on me
if you recall
and let the sun shine
a little brighter
warming this cold heart,
the heart missing you.

Morefiah


Sorry, I could not get the image to work. I really tried.

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KristieSue
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1 posted 2003-04-03 12:53 PM


for the pic to work...copy this and surround it with <>then put it in the VERY beginning of your msg...

img src= "http://imagecache2.allposters.com/images/DIR/8404.jpg "

Btw...wonderful job :-)


Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

[This message has been edited by KristieSue (04-03-2003 12:54 AM).]

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