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serenity blaze
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0 posted 11-27-2002 11:11 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

give it a try!
http://www.webcom.com/wordings/artofwrite/poetrygenerator.html
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1 posted 11-27-2002 11:25 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Well now, no one has an excuse for a moody muse, do they?  Very interesting, Karen!  I'll be back to play with it some more!
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2 posted 11-27-2002 12:14 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Interesting. I might do this one at night, daytime hours rarely suit my muse.
Thanks for the link.
BTW, did you send me an email card 11/26? I've told my daughter never to open any free greetings, as I've been warned of a few that are viruses. Let me know if it was really from YOU and I'll open it, as it is stored right now in a don't open yet  folder. Thanks, Kacy
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3 posted 11-27-2002 12:18 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Yep, it's really from me...and I was told by one of those geek types that this site was okay, for now anyhow. gobble gobble!
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4 posted 11-27-2002 03:32 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

"In the channel of exclusion children ache"?!

Well, to be fair, you never said it would create *good* verse. :supergroin:
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5 posted 11-27-2002 03:48 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

In the circus of discordance the cars fill,


now there is a line to build off of.. ( chuckling)

In the circus of discordance the cars fill
with depraved clowns deperate to throw pies
into tuba mouthed music as they quell nothing
but add chaos to the traffic flow
waiting only for the lights to change
from yellow to green

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6 posted 11-27-2002 05:04 PM       View Profile for quietlydying   Email quietlydying   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for quietlydying

this one is fun.  

will be back to share some ramblings.

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed.  betty, i think it's time you leave now.

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7 posted 11-27-2002 05:21 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Ooo, I like that one, Ron.

In the circus of discordance cars fill
and the peanuts of pathos are salty.
The three-ring of redemption is closed
and the ringmaster of recompense is late.

Oh, poor clowns, ye all, who cry
like the cover of a certain Sinatra record.
Have a popcorn of unity on me,
and chase it down with the sweet ...

Good lord, i can't even stop laughing long enough to finish this.

InstaMike
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8 posted 11-27-2002 05:30 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

sigh...did anybody even READ the accompanying advice?

and I got one I like:

"In the cavern of revelry the handmaids knead..."

yep, they must have seen me coming!

Try that one mikey, with an open mind?
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9 posted 11-27-2002 06:44 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Here's another I like:

In the courtroom of intellect the puddles tow,

serenity blaze
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10 posted 11-27-2002 06:46 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

this one too:

In the stable of ecstasy the peacocks lecture,  
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In the nursery of arrogance the princes hunker.

I actually like that... scary!
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12 posted 11-27-2002 07:08 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

In the valley of revelry the veins bond,  
I want a new one!
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13 posted 11-27-2002 07:11 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

sharon? I understand that one...

tell ya what, I'll give yours a shot???

groan..

and C? it IS scary...

but keep in mind the idea is just to produce thought. You are supposed to just let it flow. Then let it be. You ARE allowed to edit the original thought. Um...one day later. smiling...C? I'd really like to see what you do with that!
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14 posted 11-27-2002 10:14 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I cheated, but still didn't find one that I liked. I'll make up my own, thank you

In the mind of a seed, youth sprouts.

Never be normal!

Kielo
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15 posted 11-29-2002 12:09 AM       View Profile for Kielo   Email Kielo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kielo

In the kitchen of mystery the weeds creep,
entangling,
fouling feet,
tripping wrapping twisting pulling
to trap and fall
the victims of secrecy.
Confused,
they stagger
stumble blindly,
tangling themselves further
in a mess of weeds they cannot see.

And I?
I stand over all,
conjuring,
controlling,
laughing at lost wanderers,
caught in my weave.

I am amused.

...

Thank you... twas fun!

Kielo

I'm making my own country, and calling it Nothing. "We're our own country, and Nothing will save us now!"

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16 posted 11-29-2002 01:13 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ok...I like this one:


In the stable of ignorance the heralds sigh,
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17 posted 11-29-2002 02:17 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ok Serene one...hold my feet to the fire because I just got this one...

In the attic of reason the puppets ache,  

and I swear I will do something with it later tonight.

Promise.

It's too good not to use...

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18 posted 11-29-2002 03:42 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

I got this one.

Hopefully I'll get around to actually writing it? My pen hand is rather stubborn now.

In The shelter of piety the rains wait.

~~I Love You~~

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19 posted 11-30-2002 09:57 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

My promise came a little late - a flu bug tried to bite yesterday...but stretching the mind muscles this morning was certainly a cure in the right direction...

thanks, Serene One...this challege was a, ahem, pip!
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