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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-11-27 11:11 AM


give it a try!
http://www.webcom.com/wordings/artofwrite/poetrygenerator.html

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-11-27 11:25 AM



Well now, no one has an excuse for a moody muse, do they?  Very interesting, Karen!  I'll be back to play with it some more!

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2 posted 2002-11-27 12:14 PM


Interesting. I might do this one at night, daytime hours rarely suit my muse.
Thanks for the link.
BTW, did you send me an email card 11/26? I've told my daughter never to open any free greetings, as I've been warned of a few that are viruses. Let me know if it was really from YOU and I'll open it, as it is stored right now in a don't open yet  folder. Thanks, Kacy

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3 posted 2002-11-27 12:18 PM


Yep, it's really from me...and I was told by one of those geek types that this site was okay, for now anyhow. gobble gobble!
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4 posted 2002-11-27 03:32 PM


"In the channel of exclusion children ache"?!

Well, to be fair, you never said it would create *good* verse. :supergroin:

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5 posted 2002-11-27 03:48 PM


In the circus of discordance the cars fill,


now there is a line to build off of.. ( chuckling)

In the circus of discordance the cars fill
with depraved clowns deperate to throw pies
into tuba mouthed music as they quell nothing
but add chaos to the traffic flow
waiting only for the lights to change
from yellow to green


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6 posted 2002-11-27 05:04 PM


this one is fun.  

will be back to share some ramblings.

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed.  betty, i think it's time you leave now.

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7 posted 2002-11-27 05:21 PM


Ooo, I like that one, Ron.

In the circus of discordance cars fill
and the peanuts of pathos are salty.
The three-ring of redemption is closed
and the ringmaster of recompense is late.

Oh, poor clowns, ye all, who cry
like the cover of a certain Sinatra record.
Have a popcorn of unity on me,
and chase it down with the sweet ...

Good lord, i can't even stop laughing long enough to finish this.

InstaMike

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8 posted 2002-11-27 05:30 PM


sigh...did anybody even READ the accompanying advice?

and I got one I like:

"In the cavern of revelry the handmaids knead..."

yep, they must have seen me coming!

Try that one mikey, with an open mind?

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9 posted 2002-11-27 06:44 PM


Here's another I like:

In the courtroom of intellect the puddles tow,


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10 posted 2002-11-27 06:46 PM


this one too:

In the stable of ecstasy the peacocks lecture,  

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11 posted 2002-11-27 07:04 PM


In the nursery of arrogance the princes hunker.

I actually like that... scary!

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12 posted 2002-11-27 07:08 PM


In the valley of revelry the veins bond,  
I want a new one!

serenity blaze
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13 posted 2002-11-27 07:11 PM


sharon? I understand that one...

tell ya what, I'll give yours a shot???

groan..

and C? it IS scary...

but keep in mind the idea is just to produce thought. You are supposed to just let it flow. Then let it be. You ARE allowed to edit the original thought. Um...one day later. smiling...C? I'd really like to see what you do with that!

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14 posted 2002-11-27 10:14 PM


I cheated, but still didn't find one that I liked. I'll make up my own, thank you

In the mind of a seed, youth sprouts.

Never be normal!

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15 posted 2002-11-29 12:09 PM


In the kitchen of mystery the weeds creep,
entangling,
fouling feet,
tripping wrapping twisting pulling
to trap and fall
the victims of secrecy.
Confused,
they stagger
stumble blindly,
tangling themselves further
in a mess of weeds they cannot see.

And I?
I stand over all,
conjuring,
controlling,
laughing at lost wanderers,
caught in my weave.

I am amused.

...

Thank you... twas fun!

Kielo

I'm making my own country, and calling it Nothing. "We're our own country, and Nothing will save us now!"

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16 posted 2002-11-29 01:13 AM


Ok...I like this one:


In the stable of ignorance the heralds sigh,

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17 posted 2002-11-29 02:17 PM


Ok Serene one...hold my feet to the fire because I just got this one...

In the attic of reason the puppets ache,  

and I swear I will do something with it later tonight.

Promise.

It's too good not to use...


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18 posted 2002-11-29 03:42 PM


I got this one.

Hopefully I'll get around to actually writing it? My pen hand is rather stubborn now.

In The shelter of piety the rains wait.

~~I Love You~~

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19 posted 2002-11-30 09:57 AM


My promise came a little late - a flu bug tried to bite yesterday...but stretching the mind muscles this morning was certainly a cure in the right direction...

thanks, Serene One...this challege was a, ahem, pip!
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