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Krishankins
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0 posted 10-06-2002 11:38 AM       View Profile for Krishankins   Email Krishankins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krishankins


I'm curious as to what you all can come up with in the way of a four-liner piece.

BUT...............the catch is that you can only use words that contain four letters or less.

Can you dig it!!??

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (10-06-2002 11:39 AM).]

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1 posted 10-06-2002 07:35 PM       View Profile for Crazy Eddie   Email Crazy Eddie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crazy Eddie


When down and out the rub of silk once lost
can cut the skin and flay a mind.
In turn the play of pain upon the wise and rich
may be to love and live yet fail to miss.

Krishankins
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2 posted 10-06-2002 09:48 PM       View Profile for Krishankins   Email Krishankins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krishankins

VERY impressive, Crazy Eddie!!
Now THAT'S what it's all about! Very nicely done!!
Have you posted it in one of the forums? I looked in open, but didn't see it. You should post it!!


Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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you beat my own word
into the dark of the
rust in my mind.

when will you end this mad plea?

/jen/


i'm so bitterly disappointed.  betty, i think it's time you leave now.

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-20-2002 11:08 PM).]

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