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Yet another Dark thing

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bsquirrel
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0 posted 07-30-2002 02:55 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

This title has been in my head since writing "Burning web of lies," but I currently am trying to process how to write something for wranx's Joycean challenge, as well as an adult poem about ice cream (nope, I haven't forgotten, Lori! heh heh). So.....

Something for dark titled "A flower in my tomb."

But ... but .... something about the beauty of that flower. Heck, since it's Dark, something about the beauty of that tomb too, if y' like.

See y' there. I'll be wearing the fishing hat covered in gravedust.

Or something.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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1 posted 07-30-2002 04:50 PM       View Profile for Moon Dust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moon Dust

Ok then I think of something

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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I hafta stop doing these poems.

The loneliest words you'll ever know:
if only, if only it were so.

JS

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3 posted 08-01-2002 01:31 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I'm loving these poems. And thanks for the topical one, brian. Powerful stuff.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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Just found this spot.
I am late for the "Buring web of lies" ....I think that is what it was the title was?  Anyway I can already come up with one for that one....and possibly the one for this time.
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5 posted 08-02-2002 06:48 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Oh, Burning web of lies wasn't a challenge, just the poem I had written while thinking of how to word this challenge. That probably doesn't make sense.

You're welcome to either phrase, D.C.!

Mike

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-KB

 
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