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MIdsummerRain
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

0 posted 2002-07-23 05:20 AM


I found this line, this phrase about an hour & a half ago . . . I've been thinking about it ever since, so I thought I'd share . . . Steal my Tongue Nothing big I know, but I thought it would be fun to see what everyone would get out of this . . . So come on, Inspire me with a thought I cant think of ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

© Copyright 2002 Rayne Leigh - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-07-23 02:45 PM


steal my tongue
let silence reign
let my thoughts
remain unsaid.
May the only sound I hear
be the voices in my head.

Keep me from the consequence
of words that must be heard in shout.
Let me stay a silent fool--
than to speak, removing doubt.

*sigh* a "toss-off" I admit...I'll think about this one some more rayne...

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2002-07-23 11:50 PM


Steal my Tongue

It just never seems to stop
The verbal wounds I inflict
I know the minute I do it
Each word like demon’s prick

You suffer for the sins
Of a lover long since departed
And in your pain I find myself
Defeated and cold hearted

I try to stop the flow
Of a venom that will always come
Sometimes I wish that you would
Reach in my mouth, steal my tongue

MIdsummerRain
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri
3 posted 2002-07-24 02:12 AM


:::In AwE::: How do you do that?!?!?!?
Exquisite Pieces by Extraordinary Women! ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

Permiabilities
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since 2002-07-05
Posts 27

4 posted 2002-07-24 07:27 PM


and to the one,
with emerald eyes...
come feel for fun...
and with your lips,
steal my tounge.

and a sweet existance,
that i never break from...
steal my breath,
until you are done...
and with your lips...
steal my tounge.

*I took a shot*

[This message has been edited by Permiabilities (07-24-2002 07:28 PM).]

MIdsummerRain
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri
5 posted 2002-07-25 12:56 PM


:::LeFT SpEEchLeSS::: ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

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