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MIdsummerRain
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0 posted 05-30-2002 03:51 AM       View Profile for MIdsummerRain   Email MIdsummerRain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MIdsummerRain

Guide me to an Ocean...ThAtS It!!!!! Can you belive it?!?! I ran across this line in a poetry book from long ago, & was taken by it, yet, I can't seem to to get past "Ocean"
I figured that this would be as good a challenge as any, so poets, show me what you got!


For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

Mon Cherie
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1 posted 05-30-2002 12:26 PM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

I wanna give it a shot!
Don't expect much, but then I'll give it my best!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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2 posted 06-03-2002 12:40 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum69/HTML/002993.html
Here's mine.
MidnightSon
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3 posted 06-03-2002 10:12 PM       View Profile for MidnightSon   Email MidnightSon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MidnightSon

i've been stuck in a writing rut for sometime now. thanks for the idea and helping me move my brain (and pen) along.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

Mon Cherie
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4 posted 06-07-2002 10:14 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

Here's what I've done for the challenge...
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum69/HTML/003227.html

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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5 posted 06-11-2002 05:58 PM       View Profile for Anonymity   Email Anonymity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anonymity

MidsummerRain I thank you for this challenge along with reading poetry here I was able to respond to your challange with the following post:

http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum39/HTML/000909.html


Please let me know what you think.  Thank you.
 
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