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MIdsummerRain
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0 posted 2002-05-30 03:51 AM


Guide me to an Ocean...ThAtS It!!!!! Can you belive it?!?! I ran across this line in a poetry book from long ago, & was taken by it, yet, I can't seem to to get past "Ocean"
I figured that this would be as good a challenge as any, so poets, show me what you got!


For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

© Copyright 2002 Rayne Leigh - All Rights Reserved
Mon Cherie
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1 posted 2002-05-30 12:26 PM


I wanna give it a shot!
Don't expect much, but then I'll give it my best!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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2 posted 2002-06-03 12:40 PM


/pip/Forum69/HTML/002993.html
Here's mine.

MidnightSon
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3 posted 2002-06-03 10:12 PM


i've been stuck in a writing rut for sometime now. thanks for the idea and helping me move my brain (and pen) along.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

Mon Cherie
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4 posted 2002-06-07 10:14 AM


Here's what I've done for the challenge...
/pip/Forum69/HTML/003227.html

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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5 posted 2002-06-11 05:58 PM


MidsummerRain I thank you for this challenge along with reading poetry here I was able to respond to your challange with the following post:

/pip/Forum39/HTML/000909.html


Please let me know what you think.  Thank you.

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