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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2002-03-12 10:37 AM


I actually have a hard time believing that
Poet deVine ever runs out of words or phrases,
So here is a format challenge.

The first line is the last line backwards
~ or ~
the last line is the first line backwards

Example:

Sparks flew when touching

Touching when flew sparks


Touching when flew sparks
The campfire grew like their emotions
Tossing another log on the fire,
Emotions warmed more than the campfire
Sparks flew when touching.

Well, you get the idea, I hope
I used a nicer topic for example,
Cause I know it’s more of crowds temperament.

Gloom


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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-03-12 12:08 PM


Do I have to use the phrase you used? If not, do you have one for me? It would be a double challenge...


Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2002-03-12 01:22 PM


You may use any phrase you like

but this is not just for you
anyone can join in.

Gloom

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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2002-03-12 07:22 PM



You without doubts tormenting
Smiled at my discomfort
My doubts seemed to be enough
For the world to ponder about
I drove you away, worrying
If love could be our salvation
Now I face the world alone with
Tormenting doubts without you

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4 posted 2002-03-13 02:28 PM


Challenge accepted and posted

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