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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 03-12-2002 10:37 AM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

I actually have a hard time believing that
Poet deVine ever runs out of words or phrases,
So here is a format challenge.

The first line is the last line backwards
~ or ~
the last line is the first line backwards

Example:

Sparks flew when touching

Touching when flew sparks


Touching when flew sparks
The campfire grew like their emotions
Tossing another log on the fire,
Emotions warmed more than the campfire
Sparks flew when touching.

Well, you get the idea, I hope
I used a nicer topic for example,
Cause I know itís more of crowds temperament.

Gloom

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1 posted 03-12-2002 12:08 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Do I have to use the phrase you used? If not, do you have one for me? It would be a double challenge...

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2 posted 03-12-2002 01:22 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

You may use any phrase you like

but this is not just for you
anyone can join in.

Gloom
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3 posted 03-12-2002 07:22 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine


You without doubts tormenting
Smiled at my discomfort
My doubts seemed to be enough
For the world to ponder about
I drove you away, worrying
If love could be our salvation
Now I face the world alone with
Tormenting doubts without you
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4 posted 03-13-2002 02:28 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Challenge accepted and posted
 
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