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brian madden
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0 posted 05-24-2001 04:29 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Every couple of months my muse goes on strike and refuses to let words pour easily and every couple of months I make the same plea
so if anyone has any words phrases or ideas please feel free to donate them and I will see what I can do.  
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1 posted 05-25-2001 08:59 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

"in spareness he phrased grand soliloquies..."
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2 posted 05-25-2001 01:42 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Karilea you have me reaching for a dictionary and finding a suitable bribe in which to tempt my muse into action. I shall see what I can do. Thanks for the donation.  

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
as though they never exist"

nicky wire

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3 posted 05-25-2001 01:54 PM       View Profile for Moon Dust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moon Dust

Shadows graced and warmed the midnight sky,

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

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'moonlight kissed her cheek'
brian madden
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5 posted 05-25-2001 02:29 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Without a stage.
---------------

in spareness he phrased grand soliloquies,
upon hollowed stone words echoed penance.
In the shallow intermission
he recalled his first transgression,
"I am the grand Thespian
these cattle thus listen
to my every depiction
believing all lines of my fiction,
I need not props, cast, or Theatre
for of these things I am the greater."

Rising from this nostalgic fade
cursing his present lesser shade,
to the faults and shadows at hand
a phantom audience, his to command.    
The curtain raised an internal veil of insanity,
Giving birth to the Act of Humanity.
In spareness he phrased grand soliloquies
of which only he could make sense.

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
as though they never exist"

nicky wire

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6 posted 05-25-2001 02:36 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Look at you!  Bravo!  Now post this sucker in Open!

I really do appreciate the line about the cows!  That one didn't get by me!
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The past sometimes arrives in dreams

Janet Marie
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dont forget the petals Bri-babes LOL    
I should make ya write one about tylenol   LOL
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I'm hanging on your every word
Even if you dont want to speak tonite
It's alright
I'm sitting outside heaven's door
listening to you breath

brian madden
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9 posted 05-26-2001 11:46 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Thanks to everyone for their lines and helping my muse along,

jan I will try and write some tylenol friendly poetry LOL  

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see"  Whipping boy

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