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juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-20 11:18 AM


WISH YAR PRECENCE NEAR ME

There are no words to express
How much I truly care 4 u
Sometimes I fanaticize
Of feelings we can share
My heart has never known
The joy u bring
And peace u gives me
If GOD knew what I wanted
He took u off my dreams
And made u reality
Yet u walked out the doors of my heart
I wish u could be with me
I’d die to hold u or kiss u
Or merely to see ur radiant face and smile
What is love?
My heart increases pace
But I don’t understand y
To give me $ or gold
Would not be the same to me
I preyed and begged again
As I watch the time
And distant stars
Hopping u finally come to me
If I shall hold with love
Where ever u are
Every breath I bread
Will be 4 u
4 without u here
my smile joy is through
since my life was lived through falling ice
its getting cold again
and still wish to kiss u twice
its just a dream now
Hoping that some day this love could be
Is just a wish?
I did say goodbye
which was my mind talking
Can’t let u go
that’s my heart talking
I did call u a hoe
that’s my mind talking
I love u so much
that’s my heart talking
been without u
means I’m a soul just walking
I miss u dearly, but in my mind I still see u clearly
A thug neva cries, cause their heart always lies
If I did have a heart
I know it ain’t lying
When I say I love  

© Copyright 2001 juan pablo rodriguez - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-20 01:36 PM


Wow this is beauiful.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
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2 posted 2001-04-20 03:59 PM


Lovely!
Sami
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since 2001-04-08
Posts 49
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2001-04-20 10:24 PM


Juan, this is so good   I love your poems.....

~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

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