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Where Angels Belong (poem)

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Kicking Kim
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since 04-16-2001
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Where Angels Belong


The sky opens,
it speaks wise words of the stars.
Utopia can be seen,
a whirlwind of thoughts are thrown from above,
crashing down into a whilring vortex of nothing.

Such valuable language,
says nothing of interest to me.
The philosophical meanings,
are just trapped thoughts longing to be free.
Empty, foreign, nothing to understand,
very wise words in another land.

A single leaf falls from a tree,
following the echo from the message to me.
Floating high above the stars.
In search of the meaning,
of the message,
to this visit.

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


1 posted 04-16-2001 08:21 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Hi Kim,

I moved your poem to the Teen Forum so it would get more replies.

I checked out your website and decided since you're a teen, you may feel more comfortable there. If you'd rather have it in open, please email me and let me know!!

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