Where Angels Belong (poem)

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Where Angels Belong (poem)

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2001-04-16 05:30 PM

Where Angels Belong

The sky opens,
it speaks wise words of the stars.
Utopia can be seen,
a whirlwind of thoughts are thrown from above,
crashing down into a whilring vortex of nothing.

Such valuable language,
says nothing of interest to me.
The philosophical meanings,
are just trapped thoughts longing to be free.
Empty, foreign, nothing to understand,
very wise words in another land.

A single leaf falls from a tree,
following the echo from the message to me.
Floating high above the stars.
In search of the meaning,
of the message,
to this visit.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-04-16 08:21 PM

Hi Kim,

I moved your poem to the Teen Forum so it would get more replies.

I checked out your website and decided since you're a teen, you may feel more comfortable there. If you'd rather have it in open, please email me and let me know!!

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