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Romy
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0 posted 03-13-2001 09:26 AM       View Profile for Romy   Email Romy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Romy

Okay Sharon, I gave this one a try, don't know if you can guess the tune or not!
Does anybody know the one I'm thinking of?


I see cheese of green, bread moldy too,
I see a room, looks like a zoo,
and I think to myself,
what is wrong with my world?

I see piles of goo, on counters white
the food fight my kids, had late last night
and I think to myself,
what is wrong with my world?

The colors of the rainbow, so pretty in the sky
are splattered on my walls, I have to wonder why,
I see brothers shakin heads, no they donít have a clue,
why little sisters doll, is covered all in glue

and I think to myself,
what is wrong with my world?
Yes, I think to myself,
What is wrong with my world.



[This message has been edited by Romy (edited 03-13-2001).]
Packratmike
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1 posted 03-14-2001 03:15 PM       View Profile for Packratmike   Email Packratmike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Packratmike

One of my favorite songs.....Louis Armstrong

"What a Wonderful World"
Romy
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2 posted 03-14-2001 05:09 PM       View Profile for Romy   Email Romy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Romy

Bravo! Somebody guessed it! Good job packratmike! I love Louis and this is one of my favorites too.

Debbie
 
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