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Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2001-03-13 09:26 AM


Okay Sharon, I gave this one a try, don't know if you can guess the tune or not!
Does anybody know the one I'm thinking of?


I see cheese of green, bread moldy too,
I see a room, looks like a zoo,
and I think to myself,
what is wrong with my world?

I see piles of goo, on counters white
the food fight my kids, had late last night
and I think to myself,
what is wrong with my world?

The colors of the rainbow, so pretty in the sky
are splattered on my walls, I have to wonder why,
I see brothers shakin heads, no they don’t have a clue,
why little sisters doll, is covered all in glue

and I think to myself,
what is wrong with my world?
Yes, I think to myself,
What is wrong with my world.



[This message has been edited by Romy (edited 03-13-2001).]

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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA
1 posted 2001-03-14 03:15 PM


One of my favorite songs.....Louis Armstrong

"What a Wonderful World"

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
2 posted 2001-03-14 05:09 PM


Bravo! Somebody guessed it! Good job packratmike! I love Louis and this is one of my favorites too.

Debbie

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