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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY

0 posted 2001-02-17 07:54 PM




When i'm feeling lonely
With a bad case of the blues
I sit before my alter
Meditate and Pray to the moon
The glow from the moon
Reflects upon my face
Turning my frowns upside down
And Fading the blues away
Some take the moon for granted
But i look deep into it's core
It's filled with everyones problems
And i just keep adding more

*Ok noone said i was a poet*
But Im trying*



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

© Copyright 2001 Danyel L. Azar - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-02-17 07:59 PM


Perfect TM!!
Our Lady of the Moon, she is there for us, more than most people know....
Great work and thanks for sharing..
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

2 posted 2001-02-18 12:41 PM


TM, I found your poem truly sweet and a delightful read...
Thank you...
~coco~

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