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Temptress*Moon
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since 01-15-2001
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Long Island, NY


0 posted 02-17-2001 07:54 PM       View Profile for Temptress*Moon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress*Moon



When i'm feeling lonely
With a bad case of the blues
I sit before my alter
Meditate and Pray to the moon
The glow from the moon
Reflects upon my face
Turning my frowns upside down
And Fading the blues away
Some take the moon for granted
But i look deep into it's core
It's filled with everyones problems
And i just keep adding more

*Ok noone said i was a poet*
But Im trying*



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-
Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


1 posted 02-17-2001 07:59 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Perfect TM!!
Our Lady of the Moon, she is there for us, more than most people know....
Great work and thanks for sharing..
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.


CocoBaci
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2 posted 02-18-2001 12:41 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

TM, I found your poem truly sweet and a delightful read...
Thank you...
~coco~
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