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0 posted 12-14-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

In the Christmas spirit is Isis.  So my challenge.
We all had a MAJOR Christmas dream when we were kids.  The dreamed of doll or bike etc.  We can remember that...  So my challenge write a poem about that dream, getting the long sought gift from Santa and how it made you feel..   One of those feel good poems...
Post in this forum please.

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
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1 posted 12-18-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for a_little_girl   Email a_little_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a_little_girl's Home Page   View IP for a_little_girl

A snowflake on my nose,
a snowball that seems,
is all I really wanted,
in my Christmas dreams.

A little white powder puff,
sprinked on my face,
is all I need to escape,
this dreary sunny place.

I like the sensation,
that seems to come,
for everyone else in our nation,
and never for some.

--note: I live in San Diego. We don't get snow here.  
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2 posted 12-19-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

ALG~ this is so cute!   I was born in San Diego! It snows just above me......I don't get to see much of it, at least not for very long...... -SEA
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3 posted 12-20-2000 10:21 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

at the crestfallen sky, i peeked
the christmas list, i frowned and stared
i have been good this year, santa
really, cross my heart and hope to die
please send some snow along the Rainbow Express
and make my day for once

i must not have been very good in santa's eyes after all

for i received a snowglobe
where its inhabitants seemed hard at work
admiring its majesty

while heavy pelts of rain still poured outside,
drenching everyone's spirits...

well,ALG, looks like we both have the same unfulfilled wish   i live in tropical singapore  

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4 posted 12-21-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for bluebrdy65   Email bluebrdy65   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bluebrdy65

When I was about nine
I wished and I cried for feety
pajamas like I had when I was three four or five.
I told my mommy
and my daddy too
and they just said
they make them to small for you.
I went and told Santa even though
I had doubts  
But I wanted them so badly
I would sit and pout
And then Christmas morning
after santa had delivered
my feety pajamas were not there
so I shivered
I opened my presents one two and three
no feety pajamas could I see
Just one more to open
disappointment had set in.
My parents just sat there with some weird
After my brothers had a turn
I opened the last box
with little concern.
And to my delight
I jumped to my feet
and did a little dance while
my heart  skipped a beat
Warm red pajamas with white bottom feet
just in my size
I was so suprised.
and all warm on my insides.
I ran to my room
to try them on
and paraded around the house
like the cat does with a mouse.

I have a son
who just turned
But when he was nine
he asked for feety
Which were very hard to find in his size.

The poem about me is true I found and old picture that reminded me of them
then after taking this challenge I remembered my son too,
Thank you Isis  

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