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a_little_girl
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since 05-08-2000
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San Alejandro, HI, USA


0 posted 10-26-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for a_little_girl   Email a_little_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a_little_girl's Home Page   View IP for a_little_girl

I need help with this poem...can you direct it towards its end?
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The stormy weather matches my mood,
at the computer, my time to brood.
Over thoughts and such,
and not else much.

Nothing seems to flow from me,
at least nothing that you can't see.
Nothing is what this poem'll be,
that is if you'll help direct me.
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Well, direct this poem. I hope this'll be an inspired poem.
--Little Girl



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Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 10-26-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for Ron K. Fox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ron K. Fox

Create a twist, a bend of mind,
Before too long a poem you'll find,
A word of mind, a slip of the tongue,
Catch the thought, while it's still young.
Write it down, quick, with haste,
That moment's thought you must not waste,
Catch it now before it's gone,
There you see, our poem is done!
Isis
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2 posted 10-26-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Bravo Ron!!  You whizz around passions don't you!!  
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

Ron K. Fox
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3 posted 10-26-2000 10:22 PM       View Profile for Ron K. Fox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ron K. Fox

yes, i do. having a ball! Who needs Disney World!
a_little_girl
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since 05-08-2000
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San Alejandro, HI, USA


4 posted 10-26-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for a_little_girl   Email a_little_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a_little_girl's Home Page   View IP for a_little_girl

Thank you Ron. I did post a poem @ the Corner Pub...but since then, nothing came. Thank you for the inspiration.
--Little Girl
monique
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since 02-03-2000
Posts 377
Louisiana


5 posted 10-27-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

all I can twist is my body
my words can't dance
I am just lost in a bloody
battle against ignorance

the mosquitoes are biting my leg
so i can scratch myself
into an elevated shaft
where i should lay on my raft

narrow is my mind
forcing it to expand
without succes
i crawl in my bed

wishing for love
to come along
i go crazy
calling on god


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