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Mystical-Magical-Mommie ( for Isis' challenge)

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SEA
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0 posted 10-12-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA


Mystical Magical Mommie
how do you do all you do
so busy working hard
yet you still have time for me too!

I watch you often
I know, I see
you do all you do
for our family

From washing the dishes
to washing my face
you do all you do
with amazing Mommie grace

So let me tell you,
Mystical Magical Mommie of Mine
I'll love you
till the end of time!

-SEA-
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1 posted 10-12-2000 12:57 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Sea!  This is perfect, I can easily see this going in a book!!
Hope more people rise to the challenge as well as you did!!  Thanks
Isis  

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

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2 posted 10-12-2000 01:05 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Isis~ thank you so very much! I wrote this tonight while waiting for my kids at their church youth group. I'm so glad you liked this.   -SEA
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SEA, this is so wonderful and I just want to take this time to tell you that you never cease to amaze me and now I know why Justien is so comfortable with a pen...lots of support and love at home and for that alone you deserve the biggest hug ever.

{{{{{{{{{HUG}}}}}}}}
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4 posted 10-12-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Mark~ that is so sweet of you....you are such a good friend. Thank you for always replying to my poetry, and teasing and playing with me,I haven't had a friend like that since Todd (my best friend?) and he never talks to me anymore....too busy I guess.......so playing with you has been a lot of fun.   -SEA
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5 posted 10-12-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Romy   Email Romy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Romy

This is very sweet and I agree it would make a great little childrens book!  Good job!
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6 posted 10-13-2000 01:40 AM       View Profile for Romy   Email Romy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Romy

Here's my contribution to the challenge!

Someone else’s kid

If you were Annie’s mom,
I’d have to call you Mrs. Gish,
and Joe takes trombone lessons
and on Fridays they eat fish

David’s mom says "put that down!
Or you’ll take out your eye
and keeps the cookies in a jar
up on a shelf real high.

If you were not my mommy,
who would wash my face with care
and always use the nice brush,
not the mean one on my hair?

And who would watch the thunderstorms
flashing in the night,
eating popcorn by the window,
in the dark without the light?  

Who’s favorite color in the world
is red, and mine is too,
and who could teach me funny songs,
the funny way you do?

Who could smile and be so proud,
when I do all my chores,
who’s little hand but mine,
could fit exactly inside yours?

Would someone else believe me,
when I say that I can fly?
And tell me I could reach the stars
if only I would try?

If you were not my mommy,
then who’s child would I be?
And if you saw me on the street,
who’s child would you see?

Thank you mom, for choosing me
I’m happy that you did,
I don’t think I would want to be
somebody else’s kid!  





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7 posted 10-13-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Debbie~ you did an excellent poem here!! I enjoyed it very much. I wanted to let you know, you might want to post it as a new topic though, so everyone will see it, not just those that happen on to mine.This is wonderful and all should see it!   -SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-13-2000).]
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8 posted 10-13-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

a very sweet heart-warming poem...i liked
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9 posted 10-13-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Debbie yours was great too!!!  
I think I thought of the answer cos Dad's are away at work etc so much they write these books to help the kid feel closer etc.  I understand that for sure, BUT It would be nice to see equal time and books for Mom's too!!!
Thanks both Sea and Debbie for contributing  

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

 
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