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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-09-24 05:06 PM


Second times around are always the best
and Louis chose Clevey above all the rest
together to twilight they'll put to the test
enduring harmony and to friendship attest.

Louis and Clevey together you'll be
if you walk side by side, let your spirits go free
this is the one you want eternally
and the love that you show is a blessing in me

Louis and Clevey your hearts now entwined
may forever the memory of  this day be enshrined
the shining example you both took to remind
that love is not dead, and now together aligned.




"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-09-24 07:01 PM


Kethry hon this is beautiful!!  I shall pass this along to Louis today also.  Thanks.
Sorry I wasn't around to help you yesterday, but I trust the problem is fixed??
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-09-24 10:51 PM


Thanks Isis, problem definitely fixed. Thanks Ron.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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