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Isis
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Sunny Queensland


0 posted 09-24-2000 03:51 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Two souls,
One thought,
Two hearts,
One pulse.

Marriage is a duet,
One sings, the other claps,
Together united,
They face life's mishaps.

Louis & Clevey,
Together you shall face each new day,
Growing together in love, mind and spirit,
Because of the vows you've taken here today.


*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
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1 posted 09-24-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Iris,

This was not a failure at all it was the ones you wrote it for that are missing the meaning, I personally think it was perfect, maybe because they are getting married AGAIN they feel it all has to be perfect so this time it will work. I mean no bad thoughts towards them I just spent 16 yrs,  married to someone and started over and thought some what along these lines but it has nothing to do with how it all turns out. There is nothing you could posibly convey to the other to make this work it takes two, this I can vouch for because I now stand alone in what I thought was going to be it. I wish them the very best, and I admire your work you have much wisdom.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Isis
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2 posted 09-24-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks Cerenity, let's just say they are soooooooo very choosy.     Like you I know the importance of souls touching and all that, believe me!!    Glad you enjoyed it  

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


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