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Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 64
Fitchburg Ma, USA

0 posted 2000-07-20 02:16 AM


Morning turns to Afternoon turns to Night,
Do we have to go that fast wow a fast day,
Some days seem longer

Someday's are fast, somedays are slow,
Depends what kind of mood your in if your happy
Fast days if you sad slow days.

Then you know it's Afternoon,
Your sitting on the computer on the phone ect
Your bored and soon you know it's.....

Night your waiting for your husband/wife to come home.
So you can make dinner and your kids are waiting for supper.

Soon you know it's everyone to go to bed,
You read your kids a book and sing them to sleep,
You fall asleep in bed and then the day starts over!

~*~Minna~*~
Age 17

((Peace out))
~*~Fairy Princess~*~

© Copyright 2000 Minna - All Rights Reserved
linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-20 10:36 PM


Yes it is like that Minna,
I know it all too well, sometimes days are such a drudgery.
Put it this way:
If you were sitting on a hot stove, a few seconds would seem like forever.
But if you were doing something fantastic that you loved doing, a day is not long enough.
(I'm usually in open#8 or voices on the web, but it was nice to find this little corner of passions).
I go now to read the poetry challenges taken up in open #7 and #8.
Good poem too.... sorry I was rambling   Linda M.

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