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pyro
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since 2000-06-18
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0 posted 2000-06-18 03:39 PM


i would really love it if anybody or everybody could help me by writing a poem about the only person i have ever loved and ever will

her name is mirabelle and due to very unfotunate cercumstances we are being seperated i am going to a new school and she is going to university in different parts of the country

PLEASE CAN SOME ONE WRITE A SAD POEM ABOUT THIS FOR ME TO GIVE TO HER I DON'T WANT TO WRITE IT AS I FEEL I COULD NOT SUM IT UP IN ANY WORDS THE WAY I FEEL AND WOULD PROBABLY BECOME SO DEPRESSED...

THANK YOU VERY MUCH

AND YOU COULD POST IT HERE AND ALSO PLEASE SEND IT TO ME IN E-MAIL
AT MCFARLANE@WILDCOAST.COM

THANK YOU VERY VERY VERY MUCH

PYRO

P.S PLEASE USE HER NAME IN THE POEM
THANKS AGAIN PYRO


[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 06-18-2000).]

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pyro
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 12

1 posted 2000-06-18 03:50 PM


BY THE WAY OUR LOVE IS LIKE BROTHER SISTER NOT PHISICAL SO PLEASE DON'T HAVE STUFF LIKE "THE WAY YOU TOUCHED ME" OR ANY THING LIKE THAT PLEASE I AM ASKING YOU REALLY NICELY PLEASE HELP ME

PYRO

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-06-18 06:18 PM


Hon first I think you should look in the general passions in poetry section, the part where there are poems that can be used for e cards etc.  There are plenty of love and sad poems in there.
but then if you are still having problems not found one (which I believe you will) someone will help? OK?
Besides I think you should try and do it yourself it'll be your words from the heart, no gift or poem is more true than that..

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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