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The Fire (For Kamla's challenge)

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 05-27-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel


     The Fire


The fire roars
  and waves of flames
      lash out to
suffocate it's spirit
   delivering explosive insults
within its combustion

      supply the fuel
inflame the passion
     and watch the
  energy rise as
        I the fire
           the furnace
   burn furiously

          only
    to give up
    and burn with shame
      to reduce to nothing
          to become
              ash  


Dark Angel
28/5/00


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-27-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 05-27-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
I felt the searing heat
from the flames of your fire.
From the ash ...
an ember glows.

Beautifully done, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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Severn
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2 posted 05-28-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

M dear this has all the passion of the sun.

Wow - it is fantastic!!!

I love this line - and I the fire, the furnace, burn furiously.

Good stuff Soul Sis

K

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Deeply emotional poem, my friend. I see hidden meanings in every word. Excellent!  
Dark Angel
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Marge, thank you for your always lovely replies, they mean alot to me.   *Hug*


Thank you Soul-Sis, am so glad that you liked it, and that line is my favourite too.  

Thank you Sharon, this poem was written with alot of roaring emotion. Nice to see it came through.  


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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