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The Fire (For Kamla's challenge)
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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The Fire The fire roars and waves of flames lash out to suffocate it's spirit delivering explosive insults within its combustion supply the fuel inflame the passion and watch the energy rise as I the fire the furnace burn furiously only to give up and burn with shame to reduce to nothing to become ash Dark Angel 28/5/00< !signature--> Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-27-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ I felt the searing heat from the flames of your fire. From the ash ... an ember glows. Beautifully done, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
M dear this has all the passion of the sun. Wow - it is fantastic!!! I love this line - and I the fire, the furnace, burn furiously. Good stuff Soul Sis  K |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Deeply emotional poem, my friend. I see hidden meanings in every word. Excellent!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Marge, thank you for your always lovely replies, they mean alot to me. *Hug*Thank you Soul-Sis, am so glad that you liked it, and that line is my favourite too. Thank you Sharon, this poem was written with alot of roaring emotion. Nice to see it came through. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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