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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2000-05-27 07:54 PM



The Green Swamp
~*Marge Tindal*~

Among the towering Cypress trees
greeting my morning stomp
Fowl and fauna of nature dwells
in the bayou of The Green Swamp

Headway waters of Florida's
underground aquifer abounds
Sending life to all in clear, cool sips
of water's surround

Cranes, Egrets and Foxes play
among the Elderberry on display
'Tis the place that I love to roam
this Green Swamp that I call home

Wild Blackberries on the bush
brambled-sweet delight
Oh, the sound of Crickets chirping
far into the night

Fragrance of Magnolia
lemony-nostril treat
Butterfly-laden Sawgrasses
trod softly 'neath my feet

Moonlight covers The Green Swamp
putting all to rest
Great Horned Owl nestles
little ones in the nest

I breathe in the beauty
Green Swamp in all her splendor
Thinking this is just the way
my forefathers did remember

I do all I can
to keep the majesty pristine
Remembering the legendary spirits
walking through my dreams

If you have a chance
and happen to come my way
I'll share the wonder of The Green Swamp
on any given day





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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1 posted 2000-05-27 08:19 PM


Oh, Marge, sounds delicious. I love nature.
Your swamp sounds so cool!
Lovely poem and well written.  Will say
challenge well met!

~netswan

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-05-27 08:21 PM


NetSwan~
Giggling here with heady delight ...
I live on Green Swamp Road ... so this
beauty is my front door and my back door.
I love it ... thank you for liking it too.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-05-27 08:24 PM


WOW Marge this is wonderful, thanks for taking me there.  


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-05-28 10:09 AM


DarkAngel~
Thanks ... the vast array of nature on display is where I hang my heart.
So pleased you enjoyed the visit.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-05-30 06:25 AM


Marge, your Green Swamp sounds so unspoilt
and really a wonderful creation.....
just like this poem that describes it!!
Great poem, Marge!!
challenge met with such style and grace
as only you can produce.

Love and hugs,
Lil' Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-05-30 06:30 PM


Marge this is beautiful and I'd love to share the bayou with you, share every magical sight and sound.  Great work!  And as requested I shall move this to op 7 so other friends can enjoy this piece as much as I did.  
Isis

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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