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Eros Bound (Kamla's Little Challenge)
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Eros Bound ~*Marge Tindal*~ Flight of wing Eros bound taking hearts in surround Holding on not letting go hearts are drawn in cupid's bow Friends in making No love untold held in arms tender fold This I am soft-hearted friend Holding love tender until the end ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW Beautiful Marge, loved the format and it flowed wonderfully. Excellent as always!  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Thanks so much. I had to submit it 'blind' as the preview screen wouldn't let me preview ! Whew ! It turned out almost like I had envisioned. Thank you for liking it. I hope Kamla does ..... where are you little blue butterfly? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
is it ok for me to say that i see a design of a bird flying in the zigzag of your poem or a pair of breast or 2 arrows très créative monique |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I am landing on your hand softly Marge(y) to say that I agree completely with your poem! This is wonderful! And I too love the format...like a river of the soul - that is what it brought to my mind. Love you and thanks for taking up the challenge!! K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Monique~ And is it okay for me to reply that what you see is what you get? I'm such a 'boob'! ... Moi !Kammie~ Ahhhhhhh ... now I'm happy ! You're such a sweetie and this was a WONDERFULLY inspirational challenge. Love your gentle touch upon my heart. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Marge(y) - what a truly lovely to say - I never thought of this as inspirational by any means. ~Twinkle~ Smiling here... K |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
C'est belle....tres belle!!! I love this poem! Your poetry never ceases to amaze me and fill me with emotion.... and this was no exception! Wonderful!!! Love ya, Marge! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kamla~ You tickle me ! OF COURSE it was INSPIRING ... where do you think I got the blipping idea ?? Lil' Lizzie~ Yeah, that too ! Thank you, honey. It was fun to do ! Anything for my inspirational 'blue butterly' friend, Kammie. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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