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Eros Bound (Kamla's Little Challenge)

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Marge Tindal
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Eros Bound
~*Marge Tindal*~

Flight of wing
          Eros bound
           taking hearts
                in surround

                 Holding on
          not letting go
  hearts are drawn
in cupid's bow

Friends in making
     No love untold
          held in arms
              tender fold

                This I am
    soft-hearted friend
  Holding love tender
until the end


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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1 posted 05-27-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW Beautiful Marge, loved the format and it flowed wonderfully. Excellent as always!  


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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DarkAngel~
Thanks so much.
I had to submit it 'blind' as the
preview screen wouldn't let me preview !
Whew !  It turned out almost like I had
envisioned.  
Thank you for liking it.
I hope Kamla does .....
where are you little blue butterfly?
~*Marge*~


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monique
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3 posted 05-28-2000 04:36 AM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

is it ok for me to say
that i see a design of a bird flying
in the zigzag of your poem
or a pair of breast
or  2 arrows
très créative

monique
Severn
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4 posted 05-28-2000 06:48 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I am landing on your hand softly Marge(y) to say that I agree completely with your poem!

This is wonderful!

And I too love the format...like a river of the soul - that is what it brought to my mind.

Love you
and thanks for taking up the challenge!!

K
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Monique~
And is it okay for me to reply
that what you see is what you get?
I'm such a 'boob'! ...  Moi !

Kammie~
Ahhhhhhh ... now I'm happy !
You're such a sweetie and this was
a WONDERFULLY inspirational challenge.
Love your gentle touch upon my heart.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Severn
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6 posted 05-28-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Marge(y) - what a truly lovely to say - I never thought of this as inspirational by any means.

~Twinkle~

Smiling here...

K
ESP
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7 posted 05-30-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

C'est belle....tres belle!!!
I love this poem!
Your poetry never ceases to amaze me
and fill me with emotion....
and this was no exception! Wonderful!!!
Love ya, Marge!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 06-11-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kamla~
You tickle me !  
OF COURSE it was INSPIRING ...
where do you think I got the blipping idea ??

Lil' Lizzie~
Yeah, that too !  
Thank you, honey.
It was fun to do !
Anything for my inspirational 'blue butterly' friend, Kammie.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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