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Lily121
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since 2000-05-23
Posts 24


0 posted 2000-05-25 04:21 PM


Help! I'm trapped in poet's block! The sun will never come out and melt all this ooze around me! Help me and give me an idea so me poem can melt the ooze!

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2000-05-25 05:22 PM


here are some suggestions-I don't know if they will work for you--but it will give you something to ponder:
"Why did I find myself running,  
  when no one was in pursuit?"

"What in the world are you talking about--
Have you completely lost your mind?"

"If I held you any closer..."

"It's like my Mama told me, but this she didn't know..."

I hope some of these help.  David



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-05-25 09:11 PM


Good ideas David, or try this week's challenge  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2000-05-25 09:18 PM


What is the one thing you believe most in [besides love]?  Try that...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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