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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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Well here it is my favourite nature spot, my home. I live in a rural area surrounded by fields and trees. It is my favourite nature spot, just to walk and lose myself and feel at one with mother nature. ========================================== field at dusk. A field at dusk, sleeping awaiting the dawn to breathe silently, Motionless, flowing unseen in rays of light, It dances as the wind and sings on our celebration tongues. My hands are coloured with the open flesh Of a furrowed field, an earthen brown Clings to thumb and finger nail. My knees are lost in high pasture, as I stand absorbing scenery to soothe my soul, slight rustles of grass draw notice to unseen wild life. Muted greens and subtle shades of dark clothe me, bless my skin, I am their child, bare trees twists anticipating the birth of foliage, smells of seasons in cycle change, an intoxicating fragrance drives my mind into states of euphoria. Here I am at my most tender, open and tranquil. < !signature--> ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-25-2000).] |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Brian Madden WOWWW! I read your poem before really looking at your name and reading it I thought you were a wo-man the way you were describing nature I thought only fe-male thought so gentle OUF! It was époustouflant to read your flight to eternity good bye Brian Madden It is so rare for me to meet a-man with so much je-ne-sais-quoi=i-do-not-know new fresh look of nature moving your spirit in our eyes now that you shared it with us BRAVO! on your CONCERTO OF YOUR NATURE monique The men in Passions in Poetry are changing my way of thinking about the male population so there is sensitive man out there! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Brian such imagery and sensitivity you hold for your magical place. You described it so well I was indeed there with you and that is no small feat. You have a lovely place to retreat to when you need to think or be one with nature, that is a precious thing. Wonderful work.  And Monique,yes some men in this world are sensitive and we indeed find them here in Passions... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh, Brian what a lovely place that must be -- green ----lush ---tranquil. I felt like I was trodding beside you, disturbing your peace with nature -) ~netswan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Muted greens and subtle shades of dark clothe me, bless my skin, I am their child, bare trees twists anticipating the birth of foliage, smells of seasons in cycle change, an intoxicating fragrance drives my mind into states of euphoria. Here I am at my most tender, open and tranquil. --------------- and all I got in my back yard is trees and grass NO FAIR LOL wow you really do see things differently... amazing imagery Bri... im not gonna touch this now...*smile* you scared off me muse  later Bri-gator. jm |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Merci Beaucoup Monique (five years of French classes in secondary/high school and those words are all I can remember). I like to be in touch with my sensitive side. Thank you very much for your kind words. yes Isis I am fortunate to live in a scenic area, it feel isolated at times but it is a small price to pay. I am glad that you could envision my little spot, you are welcome to visit anytime. Thanks for visiting and for your lovely words. No Netswan you were not disturbing my peace with nature, it is one of those things that is more beautiful when shared. Hi Janet, all I have is trees and grass as well, granted they are in a large field. I am sorry for scaring your muse off, I really did not mean to. Thank you kind words, I guess I do see things differently...I'll take that as a compliment.  ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I've never read a poem before when I have been so there well done  We are all poets, its just some people dont know it yet. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrianM~ To walk among the grasses tall ... seen through the eyes of a friend who shares all. Beautifully stated. I believe we may have walked together in the time before this ... spirits dwell in the lands of the heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Well Maria, I am glad that you enjoyed my little nature spot feel free to visit anytime you want. thank your for your kind words. Marge that was wonderful "I believe we may have walked together in the time before this ... spirits dwell in the lands of the heart." the lands of the heart they call "Passions," thank you for your lovely reply. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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