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Shedding Scale (Isis Challenge)

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monique
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0 posted 05-20-2000 02:58 AM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

My scale are so glued
I can't get them off
Even if i wanted too
Which i want but not enough

i called on GOD
please help me
and in the back of my mind
"i'll go see him again"
just one more time
to hear more lies
using them to spend
more time with him

and sometime i just can't
go on like this
and bang zoom
i go right back into
the cesspool

do i really love him that much
or am i out of my freaking mind
what is going on here

the truth shall set me free
where is the truth?


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1 posted 05-21-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

This is excellent monique. . .

I love the last line, "the truth shall set me free, where is the truth?"  we've all wondered that at one time or another. . .

Well done. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

monique
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2 posted 05-22-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

O Sven thank you
I don't think it is much of a poem
I was letting steam out of meathead

monique
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3 posted 05-22-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Monique, letting out steam or not, this was a wonderful poem, challenge well met hon  
I too love and relate to the last line..

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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