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Why will you not listen to me?(Isis Challenge)

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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


0 posted 04-26-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Insignificant creature that I am,
Like a grain of sand in the desert.
Unseen and unheard piece of nothing,
You tread on me like dirt.

I scream to make you notice me
But you turn your head away.
I am so close to you...
Let me come into your heart if I may.

Why won't you let me in?
I can help you...don't you see?
I am right here.
Why will you not listen to me?



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netswan
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since 03-28-2000
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1 posted 04-30-2000 07:15 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Aw ESP this is sad ----how lonely
can it get?
Well done. Lovely poem.

netswan
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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2 posted 05-08-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

ESP great work!!  It hurts when no matter what you do they don't see you, or understand...  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Isis
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3 posted 05-08-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

ESP great work!!  It hurts when no matter what you do they don't see you, or understand...  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Alle'cram
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4 posted 05-10-2000 05:10 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

ESP, Very nice poem. Your feelings made visual. Your heart opened in this one. Good job. Yes, it hurts! marcy
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