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Joseph Black
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since 2000-04-25
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0 posted 2000-04-25 05:58 PM


My sense 6th, same as
pain engrained on brain or lack of there
I scream silence in futile attempts at purile
reactions of provoke
I envoke oxen yoke on myself but me be never observed.


We see me. The I and Me self dwelves into
my person satanically angelic in nature
crumpled caper paper But never observed


Despite my many plight at limelight my fight is with my constant night or whatever it is that hides me from sight


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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
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1 posted 2000-04-25 09:32 PM


This was wonderful work!!  Love the last line, constant night or whatever it is that hides you from sight!1  That is right, you do feel like no one really sees or hears you sometimes don't you?
Great work  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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