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Joseph Black
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0 posted 04-25-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Joseph Black   Email Joseph Black   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joseph Black

My sense 6th, same as
pain engrained on brain or lack of there
I scream silence in futile attempts at purile
reactions of provoke
I envoke oxen yoke on myself but me be never observed.


We see me. The I and Me self dwelves into
my person satanically angelic in nature
crumpled caper paper But never observed


Despite my many plight at limelight my fight is with my constant night or whatever it is that hides me from sight

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1 posted 04-25-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

This was wonderful work!!  Love the last line, constant night or whatever it is that hides you from sight!1  That is right, you do feel like no one really sees or hears you sometimes don't you?
Great work  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


 
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