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netswan
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Isis Challenge


The Worst Kind of Loneliness

"Dinner's Ready!"

He grabs a newspaper
and heads for the table
not a word is said.

I clean his dishes
and head for the net
"Hey, honey, this is so funny."

"Uh Huh."

Surfing - I hear him coughing
"Are you okay?"
"Uh huh."

Later - he comes
in and begins talking
about people I don't know.

"Uh huh"

netswan
ESP
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1 posted 04-25-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Excellent response to the challenge...everything was pictured so clearly in my mind's eye.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Isis
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2 posted 04-25-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Wow!  Can I relate!!!  Our conversations are mainly in the commercials.  And when he wants to talk I am expected to sit up until 1 am, when I wanna, there is always something pressing he must do.. LOL  
Another thing I noticed he whines so much more than most...???? LOL
Great work hon  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


netswan
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3 posted 04-25-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Thanks ESP and ISIS
nice to be responded to.  I didn't even
know if this was "real poetry" or not,
but couldn't resist.
ISIS a man's whining and nagging is his
way of crying ------I got myself a
real crybaby hehehe.  j/k.  He has
many great qualities.

But there is nothing
more lonely than being lonely when you
are in a room full of people. --)

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